Money is important in most people’s lives, although some people think it is more important than others.
What do you feel are the right uses of money?
What other factors are important for a good life?
In a society where people prioritize working, money has now become a crucial factor which manipulates multiple aspects. For the time being, there is a heated controversy over whether money is more vital than others. From my point of view, only righteous usage of money values and other components should also be taken into consideration.
In actual fact, money is a tool which people can take advantage of. Nevertheless, money is also a double-edged sword and its function depends on people’s intention towards it. The worthy use of money implies that it is spent on legitimate purposes wisely, for instance, investing in children’s education or purchasing food and clothes are typical examples of prudent spending. Moreover, money buys options which infers that people have an extensive array of choices including education or property ownership. A prominent example in particular, choices of education, vary from public to private school with tuition fees that correspond to its standard. Prosperous families can afford to send their children to reputable schools while the options of impoverished ones are limited down to low-cost schooling.
Besides this, there are other elements that constitute a life of ease. The top priority should be personal vitality of which empowers an individual physically. Other factors such as family, relationship, work or security also positively influence one’s fulfillment in distinctive ways.
To draw a fair conclusion, money is indeed a vital part of living and it manipulates people and society. Nonetheless, deifying money is trivial and insignificant, hence, an enjoyable life relies on other positive elements that people should pay attention to.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 5, Rule ID: ACTUAL_EXPERIENCE[1]
Message: Use simply 'fact'.
Suggestion: fact
...also be taken into consideration. In actual fact, money is a tool which people can take ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, hence, if, moreover, nevertheless, nonetheless, so, while, for instance, in particular, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1443.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50763358779 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95594608742 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.664122137405 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.7366917697 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.071428571 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7142857143 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.85714285714 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244877606189 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0819726537227 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0484506522985 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150220768907 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0461228832119 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.25 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.