Many people are afraid to leave their homes because of the fear of crime. Some believe that more actions should be taken to prevent crime. Others feel that little can be done.
Discuss both views and give your opinion?
The increasing number of crimes has led to concerns among people about going outside. Athough preventing crimes fully can be little challenge, I believe that there are measures that will deter high crime rate and increase safety in the society.
On the one hand, those people who think the level of crime never stops rising point to daily crimes and inappropriate programmas on media. Every day, we hear about minor robberies from other people and even sometimes we will witness these offenses in the streets. Moreover, most of the films on television mainly show murderous episodes and dangerous situations. Therefore, having watched these sceneries and randomly observing act of violence, people are still in a notion that we can not avoid crimes.
On the other hand, there are still solutions that can ensure society a safer lifestyle. First of all, offenders who commit severe actions, like murdering, should be given life imprisonment or death penalty. Following this, the number of potential lawbreakers would decrease and people are less likely to recommit a crime. Moreover, education has an important role to play in preventing crimes. Authorities should introduce extra lessons to the school curriculum to teach children morally and explain how bad consequences the crime has. The more the children are nurtured in a good behaviour, the higher their awareness is to the society.
To conclude, however difficult eliminating the root of the problem is, I believe strict punishment and education will reduce crime rate and help to build safer society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, even so, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1312.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.248 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64685171477 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.636 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.8950355065 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 100.923076923 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2307692308 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07692307692 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243733785687 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0746434317046 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0551773612357 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140118198547 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0651353610224 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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