The changes of tourism facilities on the island previously and after construction are shown in the maps.
Overall, the island is equipped with new buildings and paths, while the north-east part of the island remains unchanged after the development.
When it comes to the western and eastern areas, more and more accommodation buildings are constructed on the island, having six homestays in the west and nine houses in the east, and this is closely followed by the establishment of footpaths that connect the housing. However, there are no changes in the north-east region of the island except the replacement of a coconut tree to the north-east field.
Moreover, located in the middle of the cottages, the reception and the restaurant are erected and equipped with a vehicle route to link each building. Therefore, there is an installation of a harbor near the sea in the south part if the shipboard visits the island. In addition, the swimming area is provided in the north-west of the beach.
- The two maps below show an island before and after the construction of some tourist facilities Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 78
- Some companies have uniforms for their staff which must be worn at all times Discuss the advantages and disadvantages and give your own opinion 78
- Many teenagers now have their own smartphone What are the advantages and disadvantages of this and give your own opinion 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 838.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 166.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04819277108 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.874800794 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566265060241 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 249.3 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.8122579472 43.030603864 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.714285714 112.824112599 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7142857143 22.9334400587 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.23603664747 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114041445703 0.215688989381 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0562859918709 0.103423049105 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0553801057666 0.0843802449381 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0855054981381 0.15604864568 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0519780871438 0.0819641961636 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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