Irrefutable, it is modern era, where technology on the cutting age.on the contrary, the proponents of the former assert that nowadays masses avail business meetings and training through online system.This essay to intends to analyse the pros and cons in the upcoming paragraph.
To embark on the topic, there are ample merits to take coaching from internet. First and the foremost, people have the hectic schedule, they can not go at their workplace through online system they can easily do work. Furthermore, populace need to take transportation to go for training. Consequently, on that they spend lot of money and there are no amenities in public transportation, but online training is cheaper and not time consuming. Last but not the least, it is a face of modern era, where people totally depend on technology. To cite an epitome, a survey was conducted by the social department, it depicts that online system makes masses life convenient.
On the paradoxical side, there are many demerits of this this trend. Initially these systems are based on education if people are not educated then they can not to business through automated applications. Secondly, technology obstacles, if there are little error on site and tools after that they can not carry on their work and it would be result of difficult in their survival. To illustrated in other words, during battle, state stopped net still people can not spread rumors, it make people life difficult.
In final reckoning, I would like to recapitulate,that there are more advantages of it, but disadvantages cannot be neglected.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, still, then, in other words, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1328.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12741312741 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91062845858 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.598455598456 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.5985347789 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.666666667 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5833333333 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.08333333333 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140810371446 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0453646367702 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0341815807954 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0802905281026 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0296691133997 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 201, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
...ings and training through online system.This essay to intends to analyse the pros an...
^^^^
Line 1, column 215, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'intend'.
Suggestion: intend
...ing through online system.This essay to intends to analyse the pros and cons in the upc...
^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 103, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...g from internet. First and the foremost, people have the hectic schedule, they c...
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Line 2, column 137, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...emost, people have the hectic schedule, they can not go at their workplace throu...
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Line 3, column 53, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: this
...oxical side, there are many demerits of this this trend. Initially these systems are base...
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Line 3, column 484, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'makes'?
Suggestion: makes
... still people can not spread rumors, it make people life difficult. In final recko...
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Line 4, column 49, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , that
... reckoning, I would like to recapitulate,that there are more advantages of it, but d...
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Line 4, column 64, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ould like to recapitulate,that there are more advantages of it, but disadvantages...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, still, then, in other words, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1328.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12741312741 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91062845858 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.598455598456 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.5985347789 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.666666667 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5833333333 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.08333333333 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140810371446 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0453646367702 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0341815807954 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0802905281026 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0296691133997 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.