in some countries, owning a home rather than rent one is very important for people.
Why might this be case?
do you think this is positive or negative ituation?
In several nations, people believe that owning their personal accommodation is an essential matter rather than renting it. Somehow, it could be negative and positive condition depend on many factors. Yet, there is a reason why this development occurs becoming a trend.
What makes it happen in many nations? I think, it is because people start to realize that owning home gives the feeling of secure, stable and blessed and not rent. They do not have to take in to account about the tenant and amount of money that they have to pay if they rent an accommodation. Furthermore, they could modify their home by their own wish without of hesitation since it is their own.
However, positive or negative this situation is different depending on individual’s circumstances. It might be stressful for a person who come from low-income family to have their own accommodation. Not only because it is very expensive, but also we have to pay insurance, electricity, and other purpose for having private accommodation which is hard to pursue for people from middle-low community.
On the other hand, having personal home could bring a lot of advantages, especially for a person who want to take is an investment. Admittedly, the price of property will continue to rise over the time. Hence, people will be beneficially income from investing on house. Furthermore, we could not pay the feeling of happiness and actualize when we have our own house which many people pursue for.
In conclusion, i believe that owning home is a matter thing which many people wish for. Event sometimes it could be hard to bear for low-class families, it could be proper place to save our money.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 276, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'accommodation'.
Suggestion: accommodation
...oney that they have to pay if they rent an accommodation. Furthermore, they could modify their h...
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Line 9, column 16, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...y people pursue for. In conclusion, i believe that owning home is a matter th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, i think, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1398.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97508896797 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82639805781 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540925266904 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.252963241 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.375 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5625 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5625 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27015295613 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0872644663766 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0489209374602 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156089841529 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0509827355791 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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