Write a formal letter:
You and your family are moving to another country for work, and you are looking to buy a house there.
Write a letter to a property agent. In your letter:
Introduce yourself and your family
Describe the type of accommodation that you hope to find
Give your preference for the location of the accommodation
To whom it May Concern,
I am writing this letter regarding buying an accomodation in Canada. I will move from Moscow to Toronto for work in March. I am looking for a house for purchase where I will live with my small family. Firstly, I want to tell you a few words about my family. My Husband Dan works from home and my 10-years-old daughter Lilly studies at middle-school.
It means that I want to find a small house with a basement and 3 bedrooms, one for my husband and me and 2 for infants. We are going to become parents again and a second children's room is necessary. In addition, it will be nice if heating is provided by gas and utilities will contain cleaning of territory. What is more, the Internet connection should be sustainable in this block because as I said before my husband is using work remotely.
As for location, I want a safe and green district with an excellent middle-school nearby. It is of prime importance for us in choosing a place for living. I have seen such an area in the south part of the city. But maybe you could offer me something better.
I would really appreciate it if you could send me some options and hope for fruitful cooperation.
Yours faithfully,
Green Rose.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nd 2 for infants. We are going to become parents again and a second childrens roo...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...th an excellent middle-school nearby. It is of prime importance for us in choosin...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...fruitful cooperation. Yours faithfully, Green Rose.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, look, may, really, regarding, second, so, as for, in addition, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 995.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 221.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.50226244344 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72779006518 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62443438914 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 306.0 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.4488615429 44.8134815571 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.3333333333 76.5299724578 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7333333333 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 4.34317383033 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181514512322 0.216113520407 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0569757154086 0.0766984524023 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0447592117545 0.0603063233224 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0761427346575 0.12726935374 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.056551814491 0.0580467560999 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 8.37731958763 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.23 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.