Modern technology has increased our material wealth, but not our happiness. To what extent do
you agree with this statement?
In modern context, technology has played an important factor in amplifying net worth of the people. Many people hold the opinion that the technological enhancement has helped in gaining the material possessions, however, others believe that it is impeding our life. In my opinion, the abundant use of technology is the reason for the decrease in happiness of the people.
On the one hand, technology has made our life easier by supporting business to grow exponentially. Firstly, the availability of instant messaging applications is helping business to communicate till the floor level. For example, WhatsApp is being widely used as a communication channel by business organization to know the whereabouts of materials including business progresses and development. Additionally, varieties of company are using shared networking servers for the storage of their data which can be easily accessed through internet. For instance, if an employee whose job is to travel different places needs some data than it can be easily accessed through the shared network server, provided the availability of internet in the area. Also, transportation is much easier, and people can send their products through different courier service provider's like DHL and FedEx.
On the other hand, the excessive use of computers and mobile phones has impacted our physical and mental health. In the first place, people are spending most of their time sitting in the chair looking at the computer. This is the main reason people are having health issues related to backbone, neck, and nervous systems. Furthermore, the entire posture of the people is changing due to excessive use of mobile phones. If we go outside in a public area to check, it is evident people leaning downward using the mobile phones. Apart from this, the monetary expenditure that comes during the treatment of these abnormalities, will carry away the happiness of the people.
In conclusion, futuristic tech has amplified our personal possession, however, there are some challenges associated with its use. I think, the imbalance in use of the technology needs to be eliminated due to which the happiness in the people can be increased by encouraging people to take care of their health.
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- Some people say that protecting the environment is the government s responsibility Others believe that every individual should be responsible for it Discuss both views and give your own opinion 85
- Modern technology has increased our material wealth but not our happiness To what extent do you agree with this statement 95
- Modern technology has increased our material wealth but not our happiness To what extent do you agree with this statement 84
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, look, so, apart from, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, in my opinion, in the first place, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1881.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 357.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26890756303 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92928367854 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 599.4 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8090672692 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.5625 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3125 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8125 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144320445816 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0487812663643 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0464126281001 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101819494123 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0515232766975 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.