Nowadays some older people choose to live in retirement communities with other people, rather than living with their adult children. Is it a positive or negative development？
Nowadays some older peoples available for retirement facilities and i believe that,the some older humans are living for the old age home, because the adult children are thay do not have enough time to attention for old perents.
First of all, some old age parents are think that they are living from old age home,because, the some parents are do not burden for childrens. childrens are very busy for own life so, they are do not enough time for old parents and do not attention and care for parents so, parents are think that they are living for old age home.
Secondly, some older humans are living from the old age home so, old people for the same age company and the some humans are may retirement facilities in old age home such as, doctory treatment, large field of exercise and other facilities are available. The old age home in same age for all humans so,same old peoples are company for each other and the take care for any emergency in oldage home.
Overall,some old people living for old age home it is a good because, there is available for the same age company and the available for all facilities and take care in old age home. But, childrens spend time for older parents and be careful for parents.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...available for retirement facilities and i believe that,the some older humans are ...
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...retirement facilities and i believe that,the some older humans are living for the ol...
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Message: Did you mean 'same'?
Suggestion: same
...ement facilities and i believe that,the some older humans are living for the old age...
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Line 2, column 40, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'thought'.
Suggestion: thought
... First of all, some old age parents are think that they are living from old age home,...
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...k that they are living from old age home,because, the some parents are do not burden for...
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Message: Did you mean 'same'?
Suggestion: same
...e living from old age home,because, the some parents are do not burden for childrens...
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Line 2, column 115, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
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Suggestion: done
... age home,because, the some parents are do not burden for childrens. childrens are...
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...arents are do not burden for childrens. childrens are very busy for own life so, they are...
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Suggestion: thought
...on and care for parents so, parents are think that they are living for old age home. ...
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Line 3, column 110, Rule ID: THE_SOME_DAY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'same'?
Suggestion: same
...people for the same age company and the some humans are may retirement facilities in...
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Suggestion: , same
...d age home in same age for all humans so,same old peoples are company for each other ...
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...r any emergency in oldage home. Overall,some old people living for old age home it i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 41.998997996 21% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 998.0 1615.20841683 62% => OK
No of words: 219.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55707762557 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27409179787 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 85.0 176.041082164 48% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.388127853881 0.561755894193 69% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 346.5 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.2733851616 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.571428571 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.2857142857 20.7667163134 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.14285714286 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134036082625 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0945256715505 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0614966532365 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120336156194 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0634999033364 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.76 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.98 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 78.4519038076 32% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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