Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
The value of money should be instilled into youngsters since childhood because social success in defined by the amount of money one has.
The Money is very important asset in everybody life and without money no one can live happily perhaps money is not the measure of social success. The prompt says that value of money should be installed into youngsters since the childhood because social success in defined by the amount of money one has. I mostly disagree with the given prompt and i will explain my opinion in below three points.
In the beginning, the prompt state that the value of money should be installed into youngsters since childhood. i agree because the everyone should be value the money . Money is very important part of everyone's life and without money no one live life easily. If you want money then you should be work hard and it takes more time to earn but on the other side when the time come to spend money it goes very fast then the money will be going very easily. This is reason youngster should be know the value of money are they earned.
Further, the prompt also says that, social success is depend on the amount of money one has. This statement is not always right. For social success, we should required the good personality as well as the nature of person should be good. If nature of person is helping then there is always no need to get social success. if we take an example o Mother Teresa, they not required money to get social success. she had the helping nature and because of this she known for his social service. that's why, money is not the measure aspect of social success.
On the other hand, to get social success with the good nature we should require money as well to help needy person. because of twenty-oneth century most important problem is poorty and i some want to help the other the person should require the helping nature as well as money. If we see the example of Businessman like Ratan Tata, Bill Gates and Warren Buffett. This are the persons who every year help to needy society.
In the conclusion, i think, for getting social success we required money as well as good nature to help other.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'valued'?
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...e the everyone should be value the money . Money is very important part of everyon...
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Message: Did you mean 'known'?
Suggestion: known
...ily. This is reason youngster should be know the value of money are they earned. ...
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Suggestion: depended
...prompt also says that, social sucess is depend on the amount of money one has. This st...
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...as the nature of person should be good. If nature of person is helping then there ...
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...is always no need to get social sucess. if we take an example o Mother Teresa, the...
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...ot required money to get social sucess. she had the helping nature and because of t...
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... this she known for his social service. thats why, money is not the measure aspect of...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...the measure aspect of social sucess. On the other hand, to get...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Because
...ire money as well to help needy person. because of twentyoneth century most important p...
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Line 13, column 374, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[3]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: These
...atan Tata, Bill Gates and Waren Bufett. This are the persons who every year help to ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ho every year help to needy society. In the conclusion, i think,...
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Line 17, column 33, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... In the conclusion, i think, for getting social sucess we req...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, well, i think, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 58.6224719101 70% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 12.9106741573 8% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1665.0 2235.4752809 74% => OK
No of words: 365.0 442.535393258 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56164383562 5.05705443957 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.10425976633 2.79657885939 75% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 215.323595506 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.430136986301 0.4932671777 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 520.2 704.065955056 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.3756107443 60.3974514979 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.25 118.986275619 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.25 23.4991977007 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2 5.21951772744 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 7.80617977528 256% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0415458503572 0.243740707755 17% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0157481414111 0.0831039109588 19% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0236727307135 0.0758088955206 31% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0258390411763 0.150359130593 17% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0155900185523 0.0667264976115 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 14.1392134831 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 48.8420337079 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 12.1743820225 65% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 12.1639044944 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.52 8.38706741573 78% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 100.480337079 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 348, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...stly disagree with the given prompt and i will explain my opinion in below three ...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...in my opinion in below three points. In the beginning, the ...
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Line 5, column 131, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: I
...talled into youngsters since childhood. i agree because the everyone should be va...
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Line 5, column 131, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...talled into youngsters since childhood. i agree because the everyone should be va...
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Line 5, column 147, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'everyone'?
Suggestion: the; everyone
...gsters since childhood. i agree because the everyone should be value the money . Money is ve...
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Line 5, column 170, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'valued'?
Suggestion: valued
... i agree because the everyone should be value the money . Money is very important par...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 185, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...e the everyone should be value the money . Money is very important part of everyon...
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Line 5, column 507, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'known'?
Suggestion: known
...ily. This is reason youngster should be know the value of money are they earned. ...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... the value of money are they earned. Further, the prompt also...
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Line 9, column 70, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'depended'.
Suggestion: depended
...prompt also says that, social sucess is depend on the amount of money one has. This st...
^^^^^^
Line 9, column 252, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...as the nature of person should be good. If nature of person is helping then there ...
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Line 9, column 334, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...is always no need to get social sucess. if we take an example o Mother Teresa, the...
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Line 9, column 419, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: She
...ot required money to get social sucess. she had the helping nature and because of t...
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Line 9, column 500, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Thats
... this she known for his social service. thats why, money is not the measure aspect of...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
... this she known for his social service. thats why, money is not the measure aspect of...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...the measure aspect of social sucess. On the other hand, to get...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Because
...ire money as well to help needy person. because of twentyoneth century most important p...
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Line 13, column 374, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[3]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: These
...atan Tata, Bill Gates and Waren Bufett. This are the persons who every year help to ...
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Line 15, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ho every year help to needy society. In the conclusion, i think,...
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Line 17, column 33, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... In the conclusion, i think, for getting social sucess we req...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, well, i think, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 58.6224719101 70% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 12.9106741573 8% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1665.0 2235.4752809 74% => OK
No of words: 365.0 442.535393258 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56164383562 5.05705443957 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.10425976633 2.79657885939 75% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 215.323595506 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.430136986301 0.4932671777 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 520.2 704.065955056 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.3756107443 60.3974514979 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.25 118.986275619 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.25 23.4991977007 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2 5.21951772744 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 7.80617977528 256% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0415458503572 0.243740707755 17% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0157481414111 0.0831039109588 19% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0236727307135 0.0758088955206 31% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0258390411763 0.150359130593 17% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0155900185523 0.0667264976115 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 14.1392134831 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 48.8420337079 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 12.1743820225 65% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 12.1639044944 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.52 8.38706741573 78% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 100.480337079 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.