Students should choose a university major that prepares them for high-paying careers To what extent do you agree with this statement?
Choosing a university major is one of the most daunting decisions we make in our adult lives as it determines our future and must be made very carefully. Some believe that students should choose a major that will provide financial rewards later. Personally, I disagree and feel that the choice should be based on passion rather than income.
Contrary to the belief that university should prepare you for a high earning salary, a person's interest should be the key factor when choosing a major. Indeed, if you do what you love, you never work a day in your life. This means that if your dream is to become a surgeon, for instance, then performing operations every day will not be boring, but a dream come true. The same goes for someone who loves art. Working in a gallery each day, surrounded by what you love, will feel like being paid for doing your favorite hobby. So, students should choose to major in an area where they can see themselves being happy and fulfilled. If a high-paying salary comes along with that, then it is a bonus.
In addition, choosing a major based solely on financial reward rather than on fulfilment can lead to a life of misery. We spend most of our lives at work. Even if the salary is exceptional, and you can afford your dream home, holidays and expensive luxuries, who wants to be doing something they do no't feel inspired by? Evidence shows that this will lead to stress and regret later in life when you discover that money cannot buy happiness. Therefore, we should study something that will lead to a path of fulfilment and satisfaction. It is better to look back and be happy with the life we have lived, rather than the money we made.
To conclude, choosing a university major is a huge decision for many people who are just at the beginning of the rest of their lives. It is a decision that can shape their future and therefore should be chosen with care. Although potential salary is an important consideration, strongly believe that following our dreams rather than living a life of regret should be the guiding factor when making this choice.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, then, therefore, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 7.85571142285 242% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 7.30460921844 246% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 44.0 24.0651302605 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1713.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 371.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61725067385 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46465559706 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514824797844 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 540.9 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2924214261 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.1578947368 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5263157895 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.21052631579 7.06120827912 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295693761112 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0930717272189 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0671077466033 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.295693761112 0.151304729494 195% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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