People have different views about relationship between economy and average working hours of a country. I agree to some extent, that several countries with strong economy have more working hours per day, as compared to countries with unstable economy. On the other hand, I also believe that most developed countries have flexible work environments with reasonable working hours per day.
On one hand, there are several reasons that countries with long working hours have stable economy, because when people work more different projects will complete in less time. These type of countries usually experience a marginal increase in their export, because these type of countries have good reputation regarding completion of projects in required time. For instance, Japan is a one of the top economies of world and reason of this strong economy is that, people of Japan keep engage themselves in work and spend most of their time at workplaces. As a result, these type of countries become more safe, because people of these countries don't have time to fight with anyone, hence, spend most of their budget for development of industries.
On the other hand, most developed countries like UK and USA with strong economies provide flexible environment to workers at workplaces. As a result, workers of these countries become more efficient in their work. Furthermore, efficient employers produce more finished products due to which their products are most popular in world. People of this country become more friendly when they spend more time with their families and they try their best to give back to country. As we know, mental health is a most common issue nowadays but people with flexible work environment become mentally strong. As a result, there will be a dramatic reduction in number of people with mental health problems.
In conclusion, I believe that people with reasonable working hours have more efficiency as compared to people who work most hours of the day. Countries must provide flexible environments to their workers at workplaces.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, regarding, so, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1724.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22424242424 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5974063492 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.436363636364 0.561755894193 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 532.8 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 2.10420841683 380% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8767315978 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.933333333 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.26666666667 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314125648759 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131629582792 0.084324248473 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0786325580795 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219869415543 0.151304729494 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0559858361181 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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