You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
give details of your study plans
explain why you want to get a part-time job
suggest how your friend could help you find a job
Dear Rajan,
I hope you are doing well.
You will be glad to hear that I am immigrating to your country for my higher education, next week .
Let me explain this in detail. I took admission in the Kings College,Alberta and my classes will commence on 25th March, so I am planning to land a little earlier in order to find a suitable accommodation and getting familiar with this country.
However, my classes are three days per week , therefore,I have an abundant spare time that I would like to spend in earning the money .
As you know, studies are highly expensive in Canada, moreover, I have to bear my living and travel expenses and also, I do not want to put extra financial burden on my parents, so, I am thinking doing a part -time job there.
Since, you have been living there for the last three years, so it would be easy for you to find a job for me because you are acquainted with this nation .
I am waiting for your response and will see you soon.
Best regards,
Nancy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 98, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...untry for my higher education, next week . Let me explain this in detail. I too...
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Line 7, column 69, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Alberta
...l. I took admission in the Kings College,Alberta and my classes will commence on 25th Ma...
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Line 9, column 44, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ever, my classes are three days per week , therefore,I have an abundant spare time...
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Line 9, column 56, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , I
...sses are three days per week , therefore,I have an abundant spare time that I wou...
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Line 9, column 86, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... therefore,I have an abundant spare time that I would like to spend in earning th...
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Line 9, column 135, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...would like to spend in earning the money . As you know, studies are highly expe...
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Line 11, column 195, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... burden on my parents, so, I am thinking doing a part -time job there. Since, ...
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Line 13, column 125, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...you to find a job for me because you are acquainted with this nation . I am wa...
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Line 13, column 154, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...use you are acquainted with this nation . I am waiting for your response and w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, moreover, so, therefore, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 825.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53296703297 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49312269454 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.631868131868 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 244.8 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.4922520482 44.8134815571 164% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.6666666667 76.5299724578 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2222222222 16.8248392259 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 4.34317383033 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.29896907216 163% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.343041947452 0.216113520407 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131387260011 0.0766984524023 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.09490373433 0.0603063233224 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170376037707 0.12726935374 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0850970546481 0.0580467560999 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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