Some people say that the experiences a child has before starting school have the most influence on their future life. Others say that experiences as a teenager, esp at school is more influential. Discuss both views and give your own opinion?
It is commonly argued that child’s experiences prior to school time have a big impact on their future life whilst there are some of those who assert that the experiences gained during teenage years is more pivotal. From my perspective, I would lean towards the latter.
It is comprehensible why there are some proponents of the former. One of the foremost reasons is that it will become involved in their later behavior creation. In fact, youngsters' characters, and attributes will vary depending on the ways parents educate and bring up their children. For example, there is no correspondence in behavioral expressions between on a child originating from gangster families and those who comes from educated counterparts. Additionally, as a child, one will have an opportunity to pick the parents’ brains about whatever topics they wonder and leading to the cognitive development.
However, I am of the opinion that the experiences they get from secondary and high schools is more likely to affect their future life. First of all, as a teenager, one can stand a better chance of determining his or her own journey, thanks to their strong points and their majors. For example, if one have a real passion for art, he or she can opt for universities which specialize in fashion design architecture. Furthermore, besides being taught core subjects that is beneficial to their later career path, students will have a chance to participate in sports and other extracurricular activities which will boost their soft skills. In fact, nowadays, recruiters are looking beyond the technical expertise and academic performance of applicants and attach greater importance to attributes like adaptability, collaborative and creativity skills which are cultivated in experiences when engaging in outdoor activities.
To summarize, while it is undoubted that having some experiences as a preschooler is the most crucial in the long run, it seems to me that accomplishing some practical skills, and encounters will be of great significance in their future life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, furthermore, however, if, look, second, so, while, for example, in fact, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1734.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31901840491 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11101021913 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604294478528 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 540.0 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.9166588744 49.4020404114 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.384615385 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0769230769 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.15384615385 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24271486655 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0795492240937 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0899736973455 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161151801301 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0698331303587 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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