A friends of yours is thinking about applying for the same course that you did at university. He/she has asked for your advice about studying this subject. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
Give details of the course you took at the university
Explain why you recommend the university
Give some advice about how to apply
Dear Raman,
I hope this letter will find you in a good health. I am writing this letter in response to your letter requesting information regarding the university course which I did in the previous year.
When I was new to college it was also very difficult for me to choose course because there are enormous options which are bitten confusing. However, after doing lot of search online, I was able to choose Hotel Management course. It is 4 year course with both practical and theory based examinations. The course fee is just affordable approximately 5000 dollars per semester which you can fill in installments.
I firmly recommend this university because it has achieved many awards in the fields of education. Moreover, Campus provides excellent facilities like sports, libraries, and hostels. Besides this, they have experienced tutors with smart classes.
If, you want to secure a placement you should meet the college requirements as there are limited number of seats available. You can reserve a seat by applying online on the university website and you should upload all the necessary documents. For any other information you can just email me.
All the best
Ravinder
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 140, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: However
...mous options which are bitten confusing.However, after doing lot of search online, I wa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, if, moreover, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1004.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 193.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20207253886 4.54256449028 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92375849113 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.678756476684 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 312.3 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.756157262 44.8134815571 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.6666666667 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0833333333 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 4.34317383033 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255410870602 0.216113520407 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.079184263787 0.0766984524023 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.077126792465 0.0603063233224 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146838395098 0.12726935374 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100752109311 0.0580467560999 174% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 8.37731958763 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 70.7449484536 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 8.71597938144 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 7.59969072165 116% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.