A friend of yours is thinking about applying for the same course that you did at university. He/She has asked for your advice about studying this subject.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter-
give details of the course you took at the university
explain why you would recommend the university
give some advice about how to apply
Dear Mahima,
I came to know from your previous letter that you are thinking to apply for the Information Technology course from DIIT University.
To initiate, I must say you have made the right choice by choosing this course. As everyone knows that you were always interested in machine learning and computers, this course is tailor made for you. It will let you learn many programming languages which will be of utmost importance in your career. Not only this, but also the course that you have opted will give you an opportunity to work with great IT Professionals to elevate your technical skills.
The University from which I have done this course is by far the best for doing it. It has got all certified staff who will teach you the course. Additionally, the university claims 100% placements which is true to the best of my knowledge. Hostel facility and good food are also vital points that cannot be missed.
The process of applying in university is quite straightforward. You can get the form online from their website. I know few teachers who can help you in getting the admission fast if you show them your school grades.
You will thank me all through your life for helping to choose the apt university for you. Let me know if you need any other relevant information.
Thanks
Sanya
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.03092783505 297% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1084.0 937.175257732 116% => OK
No of words: 226.0 206.0 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79646017699 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59770316086 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610619469027 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 323.1 290.88556701 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.2715858793 44.8134815571 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.3846153846 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3846153846 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.30769230769 4.34317383033 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.331276669383 0.216113520407 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111331908574 0.0766984524023 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0840977248181 0.0603063233224 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200348573007 0.12726935374 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0563223201865 0.0580467560999 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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