Growth or prosperity of a country often relates to its financial position alone, mainly measured in terms of Gross Domestic Products (GDP). The GDP always measures products produced by a country and services provided in a financial year. Since the parameters are skewed and limited, there have been voices seeking change of parameters to measure actual worth of a country. I also believe that with changing world, there needs to be a wholistic view to measure sustainability and prosperity of nation, where money is just one parameter among many.
Economic progress is about creation of wealth and job opportunities using earnings of a nation, that is further reinvested in money making activities using which human well being can be attained. With globalization, where citizens can find opportunities beyond their nation, job creation cannot be the only criteria for a nation. Living conditions, health of citizens, education, human development index, happiness, conservation and maintain carbon footprint are some of the key criteria that can be added in measure of a country's progress too. For example, in India rate of economy growth pre-pandemic was very promising. However, the living conditions , malnutrition, male-female ratio, pollution have been key concerns, leading to other poorer indices. Similarly, even though US has almost retained largest economy position for many decades, most of country's wealth is possessed by it's billionaires , leading to socio economic divide.
Among the many factors that should be including in measuring country's economic development. my inclination is towards handling of environmental issues, conservation, health and education. Human capital is most important asset, which once developed can do wonders to wealth of nation. A healthy body with good mental health and education through creativity can help in inventions, leading to patents and innovations, thereby improving self sustainability.
To sum up, the world the way it is today reveres countries that score higher financially. The living conditions of developed countries also cannot be denied. However, we cannot ignore that industrialization has led to global warning, which has impacted the whole world, yet, heavy cost is borne by smaller countries. Further, there are countries that are smaller in size such as New Zealand, Sweden, Finland that have done well financially and in managing improved education, health, happiness and environmental upkeeping too. The success of such countries cannot be weighed down because of economic progress alone. Hence countries fairing well in overall development without impacting carbon foot print need to be appreciated and acknowledged. This is feasible only if measurement criteria of economy is upgraded.
Within these factors, do you think anyone is more important than the others?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, similarly, so, well, for example, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 13.1623246493 205% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2413.0 1615.20841683 149% => OK
No of words: 431.0 315.596192385 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59860788863 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55637350225 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00257593417 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 253.0 176.041082164 144% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587006960557 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 747.9 506.74238477 148% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7802873598 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.681818182 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5909090909 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.54545454545 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235652209348 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0672073825254 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0967214270401 0.0667982634062 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164475136292 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.139039204547 0.056905535591 244% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.2 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 135.0 78.4519038076 172% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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