Agree or Disagree : Banning Nuclear Technology
In early years , nuclear technology has become a controversial topic . It might be the most hazardous threat to mankind . While others argue that the nuclear industry has contributed a number of achievements related to renewable energy . Both side will be explained and show that the former is the more convincing idea .
The nuclear industry should be banned for following reasons . Firstly, nuclear fission leaks seriously affect human health. It contain a number of toxic substance, include radiation which contributes to incurable diseases such as infertility , cancer and so on . Secondly, nuclear power has impacted the environment. Disposal from radioactive waste is considered to be very difficult. Therefore if the radioactive substances leaks outside, the mother earth will be endangered. That mean causing air pollution , water contamination or even creating mutant species.
However, nuclear technology contributes numerous of achievements. The first benefit is the replacement off limited natural resources. It is found that nuclear power is an energy without emission which will become a potential energy to replace non-renewable sources such as oil or coal in the future. Nevertheless, scienses studied that there are a lot off alternative energy sources which also be renewable resource such as wind , solar and hydropower, they can be cheaper and more efficient. Additionally, nuclear power can required a big capacity of providing facilities in order to create the energy which is difficult to established
All in all , utilize the nuclear technology may become a hazardous threat if we lack perception. Government should ban nuclear power plants which are a prime target for terrorism .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1445.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.6007751938 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10166334419 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616279069767 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 53.1546675761 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.0 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1764705882 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.23529411765 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205195820157 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0734614587001 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0811943998282 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140750755208 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0470353962071 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.33 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.61 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.