In the past knowledge was contained in books Nowadays knowledge is uploaded to the internet Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages

It is irrefutably true that technology has been ushered a sea change in every field due to its advancement since many ages, therefore knowledge has been uploaded on the searching engines where searching information is become everybody cup of the tea which was stored in the books in the earlier times, it is clear that merit hold more water than demrits will be discussed in the upcoming paragraphs.

There are a numerous benefits of internet information is that first and foremost, if people search information on it, they will not have to pay exorbitantly because it need only internet connection which are available at reasonable price in every part of the world for example, in India most renowned companies are offering internet facilities just in 90 rupees for 2 months which is very economically. Furthermore, caring one place to another place is easy due to small products such as mobile phone and laptops as it can be used any part of the world owing to the easy access of internet as the world has become global village.

On the other hand, books are more reliable it cannot be used by wrong hands in order to destruction any country also it may be placed at safe which books have confidential information although regarding nation or company because terrorist hire hacker who can steal important data ,since country economy can be slow down. Last but not least, devolving countries will not offer internet services to the citizens unless authorities installed satellite in remote ares, such type of progress need hefty amount of money where books data is more usable .

To encapsulate, given aforementioned information, it is abundantly clear that befits of using internet knowledge outweigh then demerits is also famous saying that every coin has two sides .

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, may, regarding, so, then, therefore, for example, such as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1483.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02711864407 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72742652432 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620338983051 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 49.0 20.2975951904 241% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 85.9142013872 49.4020404114 174% => OK
Chars per sentence: 247.166666667 106.682146367 232% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 49.1666666667 20.7667163134 237% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 18.5 7.06120827912 262% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132354555257 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0656910845185 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.038374508897 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0850899439165 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0330683454534 0.056905535591 58% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.8 13.0946893788 205% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 21.74 50.2224549098 43% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.4 11.3001002004 198% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.78 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.13 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 9.78957915832 301% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 21.6 10.1190380762 213% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 43, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... is irrefutably true that technology has been ushered a sea change in every field...
^^
Line 1, column 219, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...g engines where searching information is become everybody cup of the tea which wa...
^^
Line 3, column 22, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'benefit'?
Suggestion: benefit
...ing paragraphs. There are a numerous benefits of internet information is that first a...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 238, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... which are available at reasonable price in every part of the world for example, ...
^^
Line 3, column 325, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...dia most renowned companies are offering internet facilities just in 90 rupees fo...
^^
Line 5, column 280, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...hire hacker who can steal important data ,since country economy can be slow down. ...
^^
Line 5, column 546, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...of money where books data is more usable . To encapsulate, given aforementioned...
^^
Line 7, column 113, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... that befits of using internet knowledge outweigh then demerits is also famous sa...
^^
Line 7, column 189, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ous saying that every coin has two sides .
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, may, regarding, so, then, therefore, for example, such as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1483.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02711864407 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72742652432 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620338983051 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 49.0 20.2975951904 241% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 85.9142013872 49.4020404114 174% => OK
Chars per sentence: 247.166666667 106.682146367 232% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 49.1666666667 20.7667163134 237% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 18.5 7.06120827912 262% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132354555257 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0656910845185 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.038374508897 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0850899439165 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0330683454534 0.056905535591 58% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.8 13.0946893788 205% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 21.74 50.2224549098 43% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.4 11.3001002004 198% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.78 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.13 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 9.78957915832 301% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 21.6 10.1190380762 213% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.