There is no doubt that selecting vegetarian diet has become a trend in the contemporary era as compared to red meat because people want to escape from health hazardous. According to the survey health issue are consider more than 75% in those people who are eating red meat,individuals therefore, want to choose vegetarian diet in order to live healthy lifestyle,My views are with the school of thought and reasons will be discussed in the upcoming paragraphs.
There are numerous causes why i think public should eat vegetarian diet, First and foremost, cutting edge technology is enhance sedentary lifestyle because inhabitants are depending on technology that's why physical work has been taken back seat which consumed a lot of calories , is instrumental for healthy living. If public nowadays consume meat,it will not digest properly,it leads to health issues such high blood pressures, cardiovascular disease and brain hemorrhage. Moreover, vegetarian diet is cheaper and easily available for both affluent and poor people as well as it contains vitamins and excess fibers which is compulsory for to get rid from various health problems.On top of that, vegetarian food cannot be damaged to environment due to it producing process contains less pesticides,it reduces soil pollution .
In addition, some meat are collected from the sea, it are contaminated due to ocean pollution over the many years. red meat are contained from forest animals who eat various species, it can lead some diseases when a person eat it he/ she will defiantly suffer from deadly diseases. On the contrary, the consumption of the meat should be limited or provided to those people who are suffering from health troubles and mainly adviced by doctors.
To encapsulate, after considering all above mentioned information, it is abundantly clear that adopting vegetarian diet on daily basis brings multifarious benefits and easily method to escape from numerous disease and a famous saying that "a healthy mind live in sound body" which not only helpful for individual development but it also need for holistic growth of nation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, i think, in addition, no doubt, as well as, on the contrary, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1787.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33432835821 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87729492546 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626865671642 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 555.3 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 20.2975951904 182% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 94.6913113461 49.4020404114 192% => OK
Chars per sentence: 198.555555556 106.682146367 186% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.2222222222 20.7667163134 179% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.2222222222 7.06120827912 201% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 5.01903807615 458% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22272184931 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0924105403785 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.038691975792 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126565433976 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0443453714821 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.3 13.0946893788 170% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 25.46 50.2224549098 51% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 11.3001002004 167% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.23 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.0 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.1190380762 166% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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