These days cultures around the world have become similar when compared to the past.
What are the reasons? Is it a positive or negative development?
Today people seem to be more similar in the way of life than at any other time in the history of humankind. This essay will argue how globalization and cultural exchanges cause this phenomenon and explain why it can be considered as a negative development in total.
Firstly, globalization has spread a shared sense of universal society. In other words, living in a globalized world, people are encouraged to abide by specific social memes, which may be completely apart from their local customs. For instance, wearing suits, introduced as an accepted uniform for formal situations, has become popular and abolished traditional clothing in many societies eventually. Secondly, cultural exchanges also could play a crucial role in people's integration these days. With advancements in the traveling industry, significant passengers travel around the globe for various aims, such as is studying every year. As a result, they would be exposed to other cultures, result in adopting them as a norm in the long term.
Many believe that cultural similarity provides people with a much more efficient way to communicate with each other, which leads to fewer contradictions stemming from cultural diversity. However, cultural integration could negatively affect the tourism industry in the long term. Sightseers would be less enthusiastic about visiting those regions that no longer have cultural attractions; therefore, tourist attractions are likely to lose a considerable part of their revenue. Moreover, the mentioned development would be at the expense of some local customs partially or even entirely. Since some exotic traditions, being more convenient, enter a country's culture, some substitution would be inevitable. This, in turn, could weak connection to the past generation to some extent.
In conclusion, different nations who are prone to global trends and continuous exchanging traditions have become more alike in the culture. Despite having some minor benefits, this seems to be an unfavorable procedure, affecting regions' tourism industry and customs.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 230, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'regions'' or 'region's'?
Suggestion: regions'; region's
... be an unfavorable procedure, affecting regions tourism industry and customs.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, apart from, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1756.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.5746031746 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97740885114 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.650793650794 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 561.6 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8933746593 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.75 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6875 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.375 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14485423604 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0434819216459 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0295501805015 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0848467219214 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0170243794896 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.04 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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