Dear John,
I hope you had a great weekend. I am writing this letter to seek help for tomorrow's seminar on Marketing Strategies.
I will be present a small discussion on digital marketing, and I would require some electronic devices to deliver my talk to all guests.
The venue will be our office auditorium for tomorrow's meeting that will take place after lunch for one-hour.
Since I have no experience in setting up the required devices for delivering my presentation, I would request you to please make the necessary arrangements such as mike, speakers, projector, and HDMI cable because you are kind of expert in preparing up those types of equipment.
Moreover, I will be coming early to the venue for checking if every electronic device is working fine because I do not want any trouble in between my talk in front of the audience. Furthermore, it would be kind enough if you will update me after making all the arrangements in the auditorium.
I look forward to receiving your response on it.
Yours faithfully,
Shwatank Bhasin
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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Dear John, I hope you had a great weekend. I am wri...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ws seminar on Marketing Strategies. I will be present a small discussion on d...
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...ll take place after lunch for one-hour. Since I have no experience in setting up...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...our response on it. Yours faithfully, Shwatank Bhasin
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, look, moreover, so, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 878.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 177.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9604519774 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85709292579 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 274.5 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.9550851171 44.8134815571 163% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.5555555556 76.5299724578 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 16.8248392259 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.88888888889 4.34317383033 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258523510367 0.216113520407 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100973313675 0.0766984524023 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0387352762967 0.0603063233224 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112097066915 0.12726935374 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0309039660824 0.0580467560999 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 8.37731958763 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 70.7449484536 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 8.71597938144 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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