The spread of multinational companies and the resulting increase of globalization produce positive effects to everyone Do you agree or disagree

First coined in the late 90s the term globalization has made it into daily life over the last years. Trying to define globalization is quite easy: it is basically a process of interaction among people, governments, companies on worldwide scale. Less easy seems how to explain the enormous advantages behind this unstoppable trend and that is indeed what this essay will try to do.

Globalization has deep roots in the history. The first example of globalization dates back to the roman empire, which extended from the dry African deserts to the rainy hills of Britain ruling the ancient world for almost thousand years. Sure, globalization has its downsides too but I would like to stress the attention on the positive aspects. First of all, a globalized economy is relatively more stable and strong than the economic models of the past. This statement could probably raise a few eyebrows, but this is the only strategy developed countries have to embrace to be competitive with rising economic giants like China or India. Even if it true that financial crisis are more likely to infect around the world, it is also true that governments can quickly find solutions to tackle recession, inflation, and other financial issues. Globalization also means more freedom. For the first time in its troubled history, mankind has experiencing a long period of peace blessed by liberty and democracy. Flights and the Internet has reduced distance from countries fueling exchanges, work connections, imports, and exports. A new kind of economy, the digital economy, has been steadily increasing its profits in the last decades. Thanks to globalization, big companies like Amazon or Google can expand their business also in developing countries helping to stabilize war-torn economies and offering good-paying jobs to local workforce.

To sum up, globalization has the made the world a safer place. Not only ordinary people are profiting from this phenomenon, but also governments, institutions, and companies as well. The rise of the Internet, the intense commercial exchanges among nations, the demand for global security, are only a few of the compounding factors that make globalization not just a word but also a necessity to successfully manage the challenges governments will have to face for the years to come.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, well, kind of, first of all, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1941.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 371.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23180592992 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92014154208 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606469002695 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 611.1 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.7450045536 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.176470588 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8235294118 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.76470588235 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112108178544 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0383892556094 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0271346946691 0.0667982634062 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0776818643487 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00354110184796 0.056905535591 6% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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