It is irrefutably true that living standard is improved in urban ares as compared to rural ares due to considerable growth of economic development, therefore, countryside areas do not take same benefits as regarding cities owing to many reasons and it discrimination can be mitigated if some concentrate steps will have been taken by government an individuals.
There are a plethora of causes behind trend, first and foremost reason is that in cities not only employment opportunities but also numerous universities are gaining attraction from rural ares, as a result, population has escalated in urban ares, accommodation cost automatically swelled as well as deforestation is being increased In order to cater the need of housing. Moreover, if many people live in the cities, they will use motorbikes, it omits dangerous smoke which can deplete the ozone layer and increase global warming. In addition, labor cost will be risen in agriculture field so that cost of goods will be inclined,due to lack of labor.
These troubles can be mitigated by adopting some steps, firstly, countryside development will not possible unless colleges, health care facilities, schools, banks, companies are introduced by authorized because of this investment people are less likely to migrate in urban ares. Last but not least, less competition has to bear in villages and such development open up new avenues for their people .
To encapsulate, after considering all above points,it is abundantly clear that government should provide basic facilities in rural ares which can bring many fruitful results not only for individuals but also helpful for holistic development.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 97, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...remost reason is that in cities not only employment opportunities but also numero...
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Line 3, column 154, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rtunities but also numerous universities are gaining attraction from rural ares a...
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Line 3, column 241, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'ares'' or 'are's'?
Suggestion: ares'; are's
...esult population has escalated in urban ares accommodation cost automatically swelle...
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Line 3, column 297, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...on cost automatically swelled as well as deforestation is being increased In ord...
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Line 3, column 331, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ell as deforestation is being increased In order to cater the need of housing Mo...
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Line 5, column 113, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'colleges'' or 'college's'?
Suggestion: colleges'; college's
...de development will not possible unless colleges health care facilities schools banks co...
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Line 5, column 282, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'not the least'.
Suggestion: not the least
...ikely to migrate in urban ares Last but not least less competition has to bear in villag...
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Line 5, column 286, Rule ID: LEAST_COMPARATIVE[1]
Message: Non-standard use of the comparative or superlative. Did you mean 'least less', 'least little'?
Suggestion: least less; least little
...y to migrate in urban ares Last but not least less competition has to bear in villages an...
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Line 5, column 320, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t not least less competition has to bear in villages and such development open up...
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Line 5, column 391, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ent open up new avenues for their people To encapsulate after considering all abo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, well, as to, in addition, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1378.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32046332046 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96930024356 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625482625483 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 259.0 20.2975951904 1276% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1378.0 106.682146367 1292% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 259.0 20.7667163134 1247% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 116.0 7.06120827912 1643% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145541707984 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145541707984 0.084324248473 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0942221919846 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.045646326554 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 133.1 13.0946893788 1016% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -208.33 50.2224549098 -415% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 106.7 11.3001002004 944% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.06 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 21.06 8.58950901804 245% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 64.0 9.78957915832 654% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 105.6 10.1190380762 1044% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 107.0 10.7795591182 993% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 97, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...remost reason is that in cities not only employment opportunities but also numero...
^^
Line 3, column 154, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rtunities but also numerous universities are gaining attraction from rural ares a...
^^
Line 3, column 241, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'ares'' or 'are's'?
Suggestion: ares'; are's
...esult population has escalated in urban ares accommodation cost automatically swelle...
^^^^
Line 3, column 297, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...on cost automatically swelled as well as deforestation is being increased In ord...
^^
Line 3, column 331, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ell as deforestation is being increased In order to cater the need of housing Mo...
^^
Line 5, column 113, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'colleges'' or 'college's'?
Suggestion: colleges'; college's
...de development will not possible unless colleges health care facilities schools banks co...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 282, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'not the least'.
Suggestion: not the least
...ikely to migrate in urban ares Last but not least less competition has to bear in villag...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 286, Rule ID: LEAST_COMPARATIVE[1]
Message: Non-standard use of the comparative or superlative. Did you mean 'least less', 'least little'?
Suggestion: least less; least little
...y to migrate in urban ares Last but not least less competition has to bear in villages an...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 320, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t not least less competition has to bear in villages and such development open up...
^^
Line 5, column 391, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ent open up new avenues for their people To encapsulate after considering all abo...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, well, as to, in addition, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1378.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32046332046 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96930024356 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625482625483 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 259.0 20.2975951904 1276% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1378.0 106.682146367 1292% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 259.0 20.7667163134 1247% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 116.0 7.06120827912 1643% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145541707984 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145541707984 0.084324248473 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0942221919846 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.045646326554 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 133.1 13.0946893788 1016% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -208.33 50.2224549098 -415% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 106.7 11.3001002004 944% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.06 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 21.06 8.58950901804 245% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 64.0 9.78957915832 654% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 105.6 10.1190380762 1044% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 107.0 10.7795591182 993% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.