How to have a good marriage
As far as you know, a happy family has an important impact on our lives, especially has enormous benefits on the development of our children’s good behaviour and character. Therefore, many people are wondering how they can make and remain a happy family as they expect.
As a woman, I would like to share my experience that I learnt from my 10-year marriage. It makes sense, one thing I find it important to make a family happy is both husbands and wives have to express their love to each other regularly. Referring to many elated couples, we should say loving words, give a kiss or hug and flirt with our partners on instant messaging or social networking site. For instance, even though if you are an introvert, try to perform your lovable behaviour and honest love through your eye contact, smile, concerning gestures and surprising presents. Especially, we always side by side to save the day when they get stuck in trouble and take care of them when they are vulnerable to illness.
Secondly, belief and respect are the keys to a happy family. Nowadays, both husbands and wives work to contribute to the family finances and have equal chance and time for their own interests as well as their friends and peers. Therefore, you have to respect their privacy and belief in their loyal love instead of surveillance or control each other. It can be expressed the concern that living together will not be avoidable having an argument. As an illustration, the couples usually disagree with educating their children and family financial burden. In these cases, you must control your temper to take something back instead of blaming for criticizing your husband and wife unless you will be more vulnerable to illness and think more about divorce.
Last but not least, the best solution to remain a happy family is equally shared parenting. Truly, both parents have equal responsibility for the family finances and parenting. For instance, wives also work to share the household financial burden with their husbands, so their husbands should be involved in household chores. It can’t be argued that both have to join hands to provide for the family and to make it happy.
In short, to make a family happy depend on not only love, belief, respect, sympathy but also the inseparable responsibility of the family finances and parenting. We as individuals should raise our awareness of equal genders and children’s nurturing. I strongly believe that every family will be happy when obey the ethically social principles.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ould be involved in household chores It cant be argued that both have to join hands ...
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Line 7, column 323, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'cants'?
Suggestion: cants
...ould be involved in household chores It cant be argued that both have to join hands ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for instance, in short, you know, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 10.4138276553 240% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 24.0651302605 187% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2052.0 1615.20841683 127% => OK
No of words: 423.0 315.596192385 134% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85106382979 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53508145475 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5181355738 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.496453900709 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 662.4 506.74238477 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 423.0 20.2975951904 2084% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 2052.0 106.682146367 1923% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 423.0 20.7667163134 2037% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 98.0 7.06120827912 1388% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106094874088 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106094874088 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0544957034455 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0304059366197 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 212.9 13.0946893788 1626% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -357.87 50.2224549098 -713% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 168.3 11.3001002004 1489% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.33 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 27.64 8.58950901804 322% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 54.0 9.78957915832 552% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 171.2 10.1190380762 1692% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 28.0 10.7795591182 260% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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