Economic progress is factor that is being considered to measure the success of a country, but there are other factors that should be considered when measuring the success of a country. Do you agree or disagree? What other factors do you think should be considered? Do you think one factor is more important than others?
It is a truth that the prosperity of one nation can partly be evaluated on its economic advance. While I agree that economic progress significantly contributes to the nation success, I believe such factors as social health condition and education systems are of equal importance.
On the one hand, economic growth is obviously considered as a key factor to assess the accomplishment of one country. In fact, without a adequate economy, the government would not have enough budget to allocate to all other aspects including healthcare and education. Therefore, the campaigns and programs created by the nation cannot be run well, as a consequence, its citizens will suffer.
On the other hand, the figure for the economic growth will be meaningless without the support of other aspects including education systems. In other words, one nation has its economic progress witnesses upward trend, whereas its education rate is low, it cannot be considered as a stable country. In fact, if one government fails to educate their residents, the result is that the corruption in the morality of people which can raise up the delinquency rate in the society. As a result, this may endanger the stability of that nation.
Besides economic development and education, public health condition is one of the key measures in assessing the success of one nation. It is true that the healthier the workforces are, the more productive they are, which could facillitate that nation to raise its income by manufacturing a large quantity of goods. Moreover, a good public health condition also enables the country to allocate the money to different economic aspects as building infrastructures, improve education systems instead of pouring budget into preventing pandemics and diseases.
All in all, besides economic progress, social heath condition and education systems significantly contribute to the success of a nation. Personally, I think they are equal and none of them outweighs each other.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, whereas, while, i think, in fact, as a result, in other words, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1643.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21587301587 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88250471974 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.473015873016 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 537.3 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 315.0 20.2975951904 1552% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1643.0 106.682146367 1540% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 315.0 20.7667163134 1517% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 152.0 7.06120827912 2153% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 29.0 5.01903807615 578% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215530206863 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.215530206863 0.084324248473 256% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131594330065 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0393431353157 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 160.7 13.0946893788 1227% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -256.71 50.2224549098 -511% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 127.3 11.3001002004 1127% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.48 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 22.62 8.58950901804 263% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 63.0 9.78957915832 644% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 128.0 10.1190380762 1265% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 128.0 10.7795591182 1187% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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