Some people believe that the best way to build a happier society is to ensure that
there are only small differences between the richest and the poorest members. To
what extent do you agree or disagree?
In order to make citizens happier, governments have been seeking the best way. Although by narrowing the financial gap can improve people’s happy index, I would argue that just doing so is not enough.
It is true that residents’ happiness can be improved by bridging the gap between the rich and the poor. This is because the majority of the rich are employers whereas most the poor are their employees, meaning that there certainly be a hierarchy in this sense. It’s highly likely that those who are in high social status would behave in a condescending way to those inferior to them, which would lead to some severe mental illness such as depression.
However, there are some other measures can be taken to address this issue. Firstly, government can invest in some public facilities such as healthcare, hospital and education. This can definitely improve people’s quality of living, consequently bring them great happiness. What’s more, reducing the heavy tax on employees’ income can make a big different. Since we live in a world where the workplace is increasingly competitive, people have to work extremely hard to earn a decent salary in order to cover their living cost. If taxes on salaries lowered, people would have more disposable income for them to spend on leisure activities such as traveling abroad, meaning that they have more options to unwind and recharge their batteries.
In conclusion, to conduct a high happiness index society, measures can be taken by the government through narrowing the economic gap, making investment in public infrastructure and decrease the income tax.
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- The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years 67
- The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries 67
- The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years
- Some argue younger people are not suitable for important positions in the government while others think this is a good idea Discuss both views and give your opinion 67
- The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'residents'' or 'resident's'?
Suggestion: residents'; resident's
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Message: Consider replacing "in a condescending way" with adverb for "condescending"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... are in high social status would behave in a condescending way to those inferior to them which would l...
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Suggestion: However,
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Suggestion: What's
...consequently bring them great happiness Whats more reducing the heavy tax on employee...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'employees'' or 'employee's'?
Suggestion: employees'; employee's
...ss Whats more reducing the heavy tax on employees income can make a big different Since w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, however, if, so, whereas, in conclusion, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1314.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01526717557 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61656184671 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580152671756 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 262.0 20.2975951904 1291% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1314.0 106.682146367 1232% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 262.0 20.7667163134 1262% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 90.0 7.06120827912 1275% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0991393579688 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0991393579688 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0635692789254 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0365514271117 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 133.2 13.0946893788 1017% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -194.45 50.2224549098 -387% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 105.5 11.3001002004 934% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.32 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 20.43 8.58950901804 238% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 53.0 9.78957915832 541% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 106.8 10.1190380762 1055% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 53.0 10.7795591182 492% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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