You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat.
Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter
explain the reasons for the noise
apologise
describe what action you will take
You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Mrs. Nga,
I am writing this letter to apologise for the immense noise from my house in the last weekend bordered you and your family.
As you may know, my house which has been built for over 20 years shows the signs of leaky roof and walls. After the pouring rains, my kitchen and bathroom floor were entirely covered with water to the ankles. Therefore, I hired a group of professional constructors to repair and rebuild the affected areas. Although wrapped carefully to restrict debris from the broken concretes and dust scattered around my house, the sound has still been thundering all day. I work outside and only come back home in the late afternoon. So it is my fault for ignoring this inconvenience.
Honestly, I appreciate your feedback that I can pay more attention to the construction progress which has been accelerated and improved soon. By the using old mattresses and soft materials to cover the ground, I assure you that help the noise be diminished as much as possible.
Sincerely,
Tuyen
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 563, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...my fault for ignoring this inconvenience Honestly I appreciate your feedback that...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
honestly, may, so, still, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 825.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 174.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74137931034 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56592944614 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.695402298851 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 252.9 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.13402061856 11% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 12.6804123711 8% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 174.0 16.3608247423 1064% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 44.8134815571 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 825.0 76.5299724578 1078% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 174.0 16.8248392259 1034% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 35.0 4.34317383033 806% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 7.41237113402 13% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211024394216 0.216113520407 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.211024394216 0.0766984524023 275% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0603063233224 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182925955568 0.12726935374 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.131977612592 0.0580467560999 227% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 87.9 8.37731958763 1049% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -96.67 70.7449484536 -137% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 3.82989690722 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 70.0 7.45979381443 938% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.4 8.71597938144 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 15.72 7.59969072165 207% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 55.0 8.62886597938 637% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 71.6 8.54432989691 838% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 88.0 8.15463917526 1079% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.