NOWADAYS ONLINE SHOPPING IS RAPIDLY REPLACING PHYSICAL SHOPPING
IN STORES.
DO THE BENEFITS OUTWEIGH THE DRAWBACKS, IN YOUR VIEW?
New advancement and development in the marketing industries came up with new ideas like online shopping, which is becoming a huge part of the lifestyle and gradually it increasing at a high-speed and left the window shopping far apart, however, both sides of every new idea positive as well as negative, In this essay we will discuss both aspects. I believe that the benefits are more than the drawbacks.
Firstly, people with their busy schedule are happy with online shopping and it's just with few clicks so it is really very beneficial for a working-class person, in online shopping, a plethora of websites now and there are a vast variety and choice for a single thing though people using these platforms rather going to markets.
According to the pandemic situation, online shopping are preferable because sellers giving no contact delivery and payment done with UPI apps, so it's safe if there is some defect every website giving 7 days’ time for return which is free of cost, it is the best way of shopping less time-consuming,
And safer way to fulfill your wish for shopping.
Secondly, there are some people who are not happy with online shopping because many of the times the order is changed for instance color, size, and material and it's really disappointing for the customers,
Sometimes the company which is at a small scale not checking the delivery person properly and they may spread the disease such as in Gurugram (Haryana) there are 4 families which are affected by corona because pizza delivery boy is affected by corona so in a single day he spread this to several people.
In conclusion, In recent years there is a trend of online shopping introduced which is very popular now and it just demolishing window shopping, however its having pros and cons, in my opinion, online shopping has its own taste and therefore with utmost safety, it's beneficial for when of time, safety, and lower the street thefts so I strongly advocate online shopping.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1624.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84776119403 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46796539617 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54328358209 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 335.0 20.2975951904 1650% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1624.0 106.682146367 1522% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 335.0 20.7667163134 1613% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 144.0 7.06120827912 2039% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217288893138 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.217288893138 0.084324248473 258% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115683317758 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0587893123236 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 168.9 13.0946893788 1290% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -268.55 50.2224549098 -535% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 133.9 11.3001002004 1185% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.33 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 23.55 8.58950901804 274% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 55.0 9.78957915832 562% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 136.0 10.1190380762 1344% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 24.0 10.7795591182 223% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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