More and more people today are using computers and electronic devices to access information. Therefore there is no longer need to print books , magazine and newspapers.
To what extent to do you agree or disagree.
In the sophisticated era, majority of multitudes admire computer and electronic equipment for obtain any sort of knowledge. As a result, it is opine that there are no requirement of printed source such as books, newspaper and magazine. I strongly disagree with this statement due to various reason which are discussed in upcoming paragraphs.
To commence with, nowadays books are replaced by internet method due to some reasons. First and foremost, printed means of information are time-consuming, whereas by the help of internet masses can search anything on one-click. Therefore, it is convenient way to get an information. In other words, if people want to learn about specific topic then they do not need to find relative book and there are no necessity of find such an artical. With the aid of internet individuals can search easily these specific statistics. Moreover, from the online network people get to know more about what's happening in world which are up to dated because news are telecasted on the web with instant time. For example, when result of US election was declared at that time news were published on internet instantly but newspapers print this news after that day.
Nonetheless, printed media can not be vanished due to plethora of reasons. Firstly, books are credible sources of information. In other words, information which are printed is more reliable and based on true facts. Moreover, people can highlights words and also make a mark where the topic was leave and whenever they got time they can start from there apart from searching to beginning. Secondly, the net based details can cause some health- hazardous such as weak eyesight, watery eyes and so on. However, books are not emitting harmful radiation like as electronic gadgets , for human being. Therefore, books are does not leave any hazard on mankind. Next to it, old age persons get difficulties to read news on the web because they do not have any skill to operates the web. Hence, books and printed media are best for them as well as they can give more attention to news because while suffering online can be disrupt by advertisements.
In conclusion , although world wide web based articles and news are taking least time and being updated with whole world yet the importance of blueprint can not be neglect due to various reasons such as credible sources, proper attention and best for health. Therefore, i strongly in favour with this notion.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 144, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'opined'.
Suggestion: opined
...y sort of knowledge. As a result, it is opine that there are no requirement of printe...
^^^^^
Line 1, column 168, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'requirements'?
Suggestion: requirements
...a result, it is opine that there are no requirement of printed source such as books, newspa...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 569, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r, from the online network people get to know more about whats happening in world...
^^
Line 2, column 587, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: what's
... network people get to know more about whats happening in world which are up to date...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 575, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ful radiation like as electronic gadgets , for human being. Therefore, books are d...
^^
Line 4, column 14, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...isrupt by advertisements. In conclusion , although world wide web based articles ...
^^
Line 4, column 69, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'taking the least'.
Suggestion: taking the least
...ld wide web based articles and news are taking least time and being updated with whole world...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, moreover, nonetheless, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, whereas, while, apart from, for example, in conclusion, sort of, such as, as a result, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2037.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 407.0 315.596192385 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00491400491 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49157444576 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68354311056 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550368550369 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 636.3 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.3495266108 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.380952381 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8571428571 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158353323069 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0470822626328 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0408627163607 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0908295026855 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0528985152651 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 144, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'opined'.
Suggestion: opined
...y sort of knowledge. As a result, it is opine that there are no requirement of printe...
^^^^^
Line 1, column 168, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'requirements'?
Suggestion: requirements
...a result, it is opine that there are no requirement of printed source such as books, newspa...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 569, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r, from the online network people get to know more about whats happening in world...
^^
Line 2, column 587, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: what's
... network people get to know more about whats happening in world which are up to date...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 575, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ful radiation like as electronic gadgets , for human being. Therefore, books are d...
^^
Line 4, column 14, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...isrupt by advertisements. In conclusion , although world wide web based articles ...
^^
Line 4, column 69, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'taking the least'.
Suggestion: taking the least
...ld wide web based articles and news are taking least time and being updated with whole world...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, moreover, nonetheless, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, whereas, while, apart from, for example, in conclusion, sort of, such as, as a result, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2037.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 407.0 315.596192385 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00491400491 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49157444576 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68354311056 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550368550369 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 636.3 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.3495266108 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.380952381 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8571428571 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158353323069 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0470822626328 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0408627163607 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0908295026855 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0528985152651 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.