A friend you met last year has invited you to visit him/her in his/her country. You have never been there before and need some information before you leave.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
request advise about a gift for his/her family
ask about activities and clothing in his/her country
find out about the food
Hello John,
How are you? I hope you are doing good with your family. I got your invitation and I'm super excited to meet you but at the same time, I'm confused as well. So, I need few suggestions about packing from you.
This will be my first time when I meet your family, so I thought to give them something as a token of love. Unfortunately, I have no idea about your family culture so please suggest that which will help me to select a gift for them. Staying with you and your family would be really fun and it gives me a chance to explore more about your place by doing different activities. Well, I'm not sure about the weather conditions of Australia, though I have searched on the internet a little bit. I have to rely on you for clothing suggestions and activities that we will do there.
Apart from that, I think you are not aware that I am allergic to seafood hence, I need to know about the cuisine available there.
Hoping for a fast reply from you. Till then take care.
Ally
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 85, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
... your family. I got your invitation and Im super excited to meet you but at the sa...
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Line 2, column 136, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...cited to meet you but at the same time, Im confused as well. So, I need few sugges...
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Line 3, column 383, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...ce by doing different activities. Well, Im not sure about the weather conditions o...
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Line 3, column 479, Rule ID: LITTLE_BIT[1]
Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
...hough I have searched on the internet a little bit. I have to rely on you for clothing sug...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, really, so, then, well, apart from, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 804.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 188.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.27659574468 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31853886178 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.63829787234 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 258.3 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0028934189 44.8134815571 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.0 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6666666667 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 4.34317383033 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267128988665 0.216113520407 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107522677964 0.0766984524023 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0527504848415 0.0603063233224 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162329859366 0.12726935374 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0629599382557 0.0580467560999 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.6 8.37731958763 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.25 8.71597938144 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.9 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.