Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There is an opinion that it would be better if universities take a similar amount of women and men for all courses. Personally, I agree with it and believe that in terms of reducing the salary gap between different genders and provide fairness and higher diversity the equal representation in every subject is significant.
Firstly, equal acceptance is needed for recovering fairness for female due to many studies show there is a gap in male and female payment, which, for instance, in Russia is equal to about 30%. The main reason for this gap is the existence of so-called male and female jobs with a difference in payment what is at the same time consequence of different participation in university subjects. Countries with gender policies in the education system have a smaller gap between women's and men's salaries. For these reasons, I am convinced that if universities get as many women as men it will lead to a more fair future.
Secondly, if compare annual reports of companies it will possible to note that the higher gender diversity in company management exists the better financial results it has. Some sociologists suppose that the reason for this efficiency bases on more democratic principles in corporate culture and gender diversity is only the consequence. Nevertheless, it is a fact and that is why this equal representation principle became the best practice of corporate policy. Thus, that is another fact why I support the idea of equal acceptances for males and females by all universities for all programs.
To summarise, there are many reasons for universities from all over the world to take women and men in the same amount for all courses including the target to reduce the salary gap between genders and provide a more fair future and efficient economy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, thus, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1491.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98662207358 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86806799587 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515050167224 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.456311547 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.545454545 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1818181818 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.72727272727 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151517239694 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0621532895363 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0605748747265 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0944265705433 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0459065065019 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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