people who are snowed under with their jobs, find it impossible to follow a sport. Consequently, they are affected by some health problems ranging from physical to mental issues which all will be discussed further in this essay. In my perspective, there are a host of reasons behind these people inactive lifestyles however I believe there are some doable measures to iron out this difficulty.
To embark upon, I suppose people who filled up their time with working hours they do not really have adequate time to follow sports activities and even in their free time they are much attracted to rest at home or laze in front a tv. To add to this reason which is a common one among traditional employees, I would guess another major reason related to general awareness exists. To be clear, these super busy employees are not totally aware of the dire consequences of not getting exercise at all. To highlight one, individuals who are not doing any regular sports are at risk of a dysfunctional immune system according to Marl Terris a Canadian sports specialists. Along with this, some mental disorders such as impulsive behavior, depression or anxiety have been witnessed in these people 50 percent more than people who are doing a dynamic activity on a regular basis according to the international Canadian health community.
To clear up this problematic issue there are countless techniques to implement though I would put a light on a major one. As this difficulty would pose some hazards to the social health of society I would think governments ought to take part to tackle this issue. I believe governments can introduce some free sports program at a certain time of the day to do by these workers. Certainly, these actions would benefit the whole society and would also increase staff's performances to a high degree.
By way of conclusion, working people usually underestimate the important role of exercising in their lives and they would end up with some illnesses, nonetheless, I am of the opinion that with some doable sports programs which have been provided by governments this difficulty is solvable.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, however, if, nonetheless, really, so, i suppose, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1767.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 355.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97746478873 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76235928935 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56338028169 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 566.1 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.8721517587 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.923076923 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3076923077 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.84615384615 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209003854008 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0699996304837 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0515044009726 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125147227434 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0442401231525 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.