It is true that, in this contemporary era, planting more trees as well as plants are necessary in urban and rural areas and this is also a trend for last few decades. According to my perspective, I contemplate we should keep balancing between planting and building houses.
To start with, planting trees and trees have lots of benefits. Firstly, they are able to control air pollution and purify air in metropolitan cities. Secondly, our cities and towns look amazing after planting more trees and plants. Furthermore, fragments is also being given by them. For example, most of the elderly people want to live in cities because of sufficient facilities regarding health sector. In addition, when we would escalate greenery in our cities then they would be able to get easily pure air and good atmosphere.
Looking at the other view, building houses is also a mandatory part in cities and towns. Firstly, urban areas are always beneficial for improving country's gdp. Secondly, if we would not build more houses so rent would be rise. For instance, people are migrating from different small cities or towns so when they would come in big cities and then they would not able to find a house so it would not be good for them.
On a concluding note, undoubtedly planting lots of trees and plants in towns and cities it is must important yet, we must understand that building houses and apartments are also a necessary part we could not leave anything. Moreover, we should keep balancing in both things rather than accepting one thing.
- People living in large cities today face many problems in their everyday life What are these problems Should governments encourage people to move to smaller regional towns 73
- In many Countries the amount of crime is increasing What do you think are the main causes of Crime How can we deal with those causes 78
- Many people argue that eating junk food has led to an unhealthy lifestyle This problem has become more common among young people these days Do you agree or disagree that junk food is the cause of the issue 84
- In many countries traditional food is being replaced by international fast food This has negative effects on both families and societies To what extend do you agree or disagree 78
- Some people say that sports play an important role in society Others however think that it is nothing more than a leisure activity Discuss both views and give your own opinion 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, then, well, for example, for instance, in addition, as well as, it is true, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1282.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89312977099 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55520027077 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549618320611 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 382.5 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5174675426 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.5714285714 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7142857143 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.6428571429 7.06120827912 179% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22619978001 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0781325508345 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0708703124459 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139272585539 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0119867338865 0.056905535591 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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