It is true that, in this contemporary era, demanding of good Universities is being escalating day by day. It is thought by some people that getting University degrees are essential thing to be successful for us, whereas others contemplate that it is dispensable. According to my perspective, we could do lots of things without attaining any graduation degree.
To start with, Firstly, universities degrees are mandatory if you want to go in a particular fields like, government sector, accounting, medical, C.A, engineering etc because if you do not have these degrees so companies would not provide you any job. Secondly, everyone wants to earn lots of money that is why University degrees are important for them. For example, work is being done nowadays by my elder brother in medical field and he has his graduation degree along with PhD so that is why he is able to do work in a company otherwise company do not hire him.
Looking at the other view, if you do not have any degree so you could also earn more money as compared to those people who have their graduation degree. In addition, we know many bollywood, Hollywood, cricketers etc, who are earning much money without having any degree. For instance, Akshay Kumar, he is one of the popular bollywood star in all over the world. He is passed his only 12 class. However, he charges 135 crores rupees for making a movie.
On a concluding note, undoubtedly University degrees are important for us if we want to get success and all things in our life yet, we must understand having a graduation degrees is not important because nobody could judge you on the basis of your degrees. Furthermore, I saw many big business man and superstars who don't have single degree.
- Giving lectures in auditoriums to large numbers of students is an old way of teaching With the technology available today there is no justification for it and everything should be done online Do you agree or disagree 78
- Some people think that new houses should be built in the same style as older houses in the local area Others disagree and say that local authorities should allow people to build houses in the style s of their own choice Discuss both view and give your own 84
- One of the most important issues facing the world todays is a shortage of food and some think genetically modified foods are a possible solution To what extend do you agree or disagree 78
- The rate of youth crime is rising in many countries What are the causes of this trend Suggest some solutions to decrease such rate 56
- Some people think public libraries is necessary however others beleive that the public library is useless Dicuss both views and give your opinion 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, whereas, for example, for instance, in addition, it is true, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1433.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80872483221 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7496329773 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587248322148 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.9892960597 49.4020404114 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.230769231 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9230769231 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5384615385 7.06120827912 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158223190588 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0551350311297 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0630582464469 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105347255435 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0434884670861 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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