The charts below show the percentage of people working in different sectors in town A and town B in 1960 and 2010.
The charts compare the changes in terms of the proportion of workers in three sectors in town A and town B between 1960 and 2010.
It is clear that in town A, while the proportion of town A’s dwellers employed in the field of manufacturing significantly decreased, service-related jobs became more popular during the 50-year period. At the same time, although town B witnessed a slight growth in terms of sales and service employment, the dominant position of manufacturing still remained.
In 1960, there was no significant gap in the distribution of workers in town A. The manufacturing-related jobs accounted for 41% of total employees in town A and the figures for sales and service were recorded equally at 30%. However, there was a dramatic climb in the proportion of manufacturing (64%) in the next 50 years, which surpassed the two others, whereas the employment of sales and service reduced to 16%5 and 20% respectively.
Looking at the town B, we can easily see that although the figure for manufacturing workers decreased by 12% during the period, it still ranked the highest position with 58%. By contrast, sales and service saw a marginal increase to 22% and 25% respectively in 2010.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, still, well, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1006.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 201.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00497512438 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16416345939 2.65546596893 119% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557213930348 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 292.5 283.868780488 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7044111358 43.030603864 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.75 112.824112599 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.125 22.9334400587 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.375 5.23603664747 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219375941479 0.215688989381 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115771562348 0.103423049105 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112200784137 0.0843802449381 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173905769541 0.15604864568 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.122931202013 0.0819641961636 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.2329268293 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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