The diagram below describes how storm water is recycled in an Australian city.
The diagram illustrates the process of stormwater being collected and reused for domestic purposes in a city in Australia.
It is clear that there are five main steps in this manmade process, beginning with water from drains are collected and passed through various chemical steps and finalizing with clean water being stored and reused on sunny days.
In the first stage of the process, the rainwater is stored/contained in the drain system under each house, before being transfer to an underground water recycling plant where it goes through four different phases to filter out unhealthy objects. The biggest things such as plastic and rubbish are eliminated first, followed by the discard of other small particles in the next step. Then water is purified from bacteria and viruses to prevent diseases, before going to the last phase where micro things as molecules and salt are removed.
In the third stage, an amount of 4 mg of chlorine is added to each litter of resulted water. After that, clean water is stored in a chamber and ready to be used. The process ends when the clean water is pumped back to houses for domestic use.
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- Advertising is all around us it is an unavoidable part of everyone life Some people say that advertising is a positive part of our lives while others say it is negative Discuss both views and give your own opinion 89
- Some people think the government should pay for health care and education but other people claim that it is the individual s responsibility Discuss both views and give your opinion 73
- It is important for all cities and towns to have large outdoor public spaces such as parks or squares Do you agree or disagree with this opinion 84
- The diagram below describes how storm water is recycled in an Australian city 78
- The charts below show the percentage of people working in different sectors in town A and town B in 1960 and 2010 84
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, then, third, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 946.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 193.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90155440415 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45922477984 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 106.607317073 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621761658031 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 283.5 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.4673439722 43.030603864 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.25 112.824112599 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.125 22.9334400587 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.875 5.23603664747 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149465156589 0.215688989381 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0640700723665 0.103423049105 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0343507604536 0.0843802449381 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0897657924503 0.15604864568 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0212318591066 0.0819641961636 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.