A friend has agreed to stay in your flat (apartment) and look after it while you are away. You want to give your friend some information about the flat.
Write a letter to this friend. In your letter:
• Give information about the flat
• Provide any important instructions
• Say what he/she should do if there are any problems
Dear Sarah,
How are you? I would like to thank you as you have agreed to move in my flat and look after it while I am on the trip.
Anyway, as it is the first time you come over, I want to tell you about my unit to feel more comfortable during your accommodation. In fact, it is a two-bedroom flat on the six floor in an apartment complex. As there is a lift, it does not need to climb any stairs. One of bedrooms has been provided for you to hit the sack and put your properties on the closets.
I was wondering if you could take care of my plants in the balcony. You just ought to water them every three days. Furthermore, I want to request from you to pay some bills, which comes at the door at the end of the month. After coming back home, I will pay you all cost you pay.
At the end, in case, some issues would come up in the flat, you can contact our complex’ janitor to assist you to resolve them. He lives in a room on the basement and I informed him that my friend is going to come over for two month.
I hope you have a great time during your accommodation in my flat .
Cheers,
Eli
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2021-05-13 | elham mousavi | 73 | view |
| 2020-10-26 | Sumitkoch85 | 61 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 122, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...omplex’ janitor to assist you to resolve them. He lives in a room on the basement...
^^^
Line 5, column 230, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'month' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'months'.
Suggestion: months
...my friend is going to come over for two month. I hope you have a great time during ...
^^^^^
Line 6, column 66, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ime during your accommodation in my flat . Cheers, Eli
^^
Line 8, column 4, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...accommodation in my flat . Cheers, Eli
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, first, furthermore, if, look, so, while, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 26.3917525773 152% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 884.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 222.0 206.0 108% => OK
Chars per words: 3.98198198198 4.54256449028 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.20620511017 2.54303337028 87% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608108108108 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 274.5 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.4908007627 44.8134815571 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.0 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0769230769 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.30769230769 4.34317383033 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313655626254 0.216113520407 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0980240419609 0.0766984524023 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0607100159829 0.0603063233224 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184638286693 0.12726935374 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.043247462026 0.0580467560999 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.9 8.37731958763 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 88.06 70.7449484536 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 5.51 8.71597938144 63% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.47 7.59969072165 85% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.