You want to learn a language. There is a teacher near to where you live.
Write a letter to the teacher. In the letter:
• say how you came to know about him/her
• explain why you want to learn
• ask what help they can offer.
Dear Ms. Smith,
I am writing to enquire you about the German language course. I have few of my friends joining to the gym every day. Coincidently, I discussed about my interest in German, one of my friend told me that she took classes from you 6 months back and I was stunned to know that you reside in the same colony where I do, so I decided to take classes from you. Let me explain you the reason for it.
Firstly, I am preparing to relocate to Canada on permanent residential through express entry process, however, I am not able to clear the cut off and therefore I decided to get the job over there, so that I meet the criteria. Moreover, I have seen German is in great demand with the advancement in different languages and can help me in getting good job in Canada.
Therefore, I seek your help in terms of teaching me German on immediate basis. Also, request you to let me know the course fee and what is the duration required to learn. Among all, I would also like to know if any help can be given for international placements. Please guide me through the procedure.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Urvashi
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, look, moreover, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 26.3917525773 136% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 950.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 213.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.46009389671 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53879072643 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619718309859 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 296.1 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.9404866204 44.8134815571 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.1666666667 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.75 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 4.34317383033 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236859949713 0.216113520407 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.082498846407 0.0766984524023 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0784281230939 0.0603063233224 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135644186026 0.12726935374 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0750951076531 0.0580467560999 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.29 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.