Your friend is in another country. Write a letter to your friend asking for advice about employment opportunities in his country.
In your letter, you should say:
-why you want to work there
-what skills and work experience you have
-inquire about details, such as salary, benefits, and hours
Dear Rohan,
It's going to be a half-a-decade and we haven't seen each other because we both live in different countries due to our work. I hope you and your family are doing well in this post-Covid world.
However, I was wondering to migrate to Canada in Toronto to discover new opportunities in my career. Since you have work in India as well as Canada, you would be the best person to advise me on the decision to moving into Canada with my family because you told me that you are overall satisfied and happy while working in Canada. Also, it would be great for us to see each other frequently while living in the same country and feel the nostalgic memories of our childhood life.
As you know, I work as a database consultant in ABC Technologies for the past five years. My prime work is to provide infrastructure solutions to clients with new projects. I have worked in different business domains sectors such as banking, healthcare, logistics, transport, and others. I have essential skills for setting up the IT infrastructure environment in my firm.
Therefore, With this kind of experience in my profile, I would like to know the opportunities and chances of getting a work permit in Canada. Since you know I am a family man, so, please share the details related to the monthly wages, taxes, extra allowances, and overpaid working hours details.
Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Regards,
Shwatank
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: IT_IS[19]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
Dear Rohan, Its going to be a half-a-decade and we have...
^^^
Line 3, column 40, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
... Its going to be a half-a-decade and we havent seen each other because we both live in...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 328, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: the; IT
... I have essential skills for setting up the IT infrastructure environment in my firm. ...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, so, therefore, well, while, kind of, such as, you know, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 26.3917525773 148% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1190.0 937.175257732 127% => OK
No of words: 246.0 206.0 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83739837398 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77641978835 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 127.690721649 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60162601626 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 369.9 290.88556701 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.5198187444 44.8134815571 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.1666666667 76.5299724578 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 16.8248392259 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.58333333333 4.34317383033 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2582970624 0.216113520407 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0812786661327 0.0766984524023 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.049615627425 0.0603063233224 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135111987088 0.12726935374 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0277882549328 0.0580467560999 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 8.37731958763 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 8.71597938144 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 41.2886597938 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.