Dear Sahil,
I hope you are doing well after the accident which went on the field while you were running and got a cramp in your leg.
As you know, you caught up in an accident while practicing for our next match with New Zealand. Since you are the captain, the coach to decide to trade your position with me on the team because we two are only highly experienced players in a team. The game was tough, thrilling, and hard because you weren't playing the match with New Zealand, and the winning team will lead to the finals. Surprisingly, we won the game but it was not fun winning without you.
Moreover, the day was hot and humid. Our body was getting off hydrated due to the sun on our head while we are playing on the ground next to New Zealand. However, in the end, the weather got to change by god's grace and it was cold and cloudy. We felt relieved on the field while playing the match against New Zealand. Like I said the match was thrilling with every ball played by the batsmen but, I missed this exciting game playing without you because you ended up with an injury in your leg. Though I heard that you'll return after two days for the finals, and I can't wait for your strategies to win the finals.
Looking forward to seeing you at the finals.
Regards,
Shain
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 301, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: weren't
... tough, thrilling, and hard because you werent playing the match with New Zealand, and...
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Line 7, column 515, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you'll
...injury in your leg. Though I heard that youll return after two days for the finals, a...
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Line 7, column 565, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...rn after two days for the finals, and I cant wait for your strategies to win the fin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, look, moreover, well, while, as to, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 26.3917525773 136% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1057.0 937.175257732 113% => OK
No of words: 240.0 206.0 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.40416666667 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.08905464399 2.54303337028 82% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5375 0.622605031667 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 297.9 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.1977995839 44.8134815571 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.0833333333 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 16.8248392259 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.83333333333 4.34317383033 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269048875826 0.216113520407 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0963780402088 0.0766984524023 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0826424046576 0.0603063233224 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174241799395 0.12726935374 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0607686249163 0.0580467560999 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 85.02 70.7449484536 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.24 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.47 7.59969072165 85% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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