The world's natural resources are consumed at an ever-increased rate. What are the causes of this situation? What are the solutions?
The increasingly consumption rate of natural resources has been a topic of concern in today world. This situation can be ascribed to several factors, such as the rising demand and the over-reliant of countries. It should be address by some definite solutions, such as manufacture more eco-friendly product and focus on alternative resources.
Over-consumption in many developing countries can be attributed to some reasons. The most obvious one is that citizens in developed countries with abundance resources are getting wealthier. As a result, they can afford a lifestyle associated with high living standard which means higher consumption of resources. Another important factor is the overdependence of countries on natural resources. They develop their economy through exploiting natural resources, such as fossil fuel, raw oil and coat. For example, the majority of electricity in Viet Nam are generated in thermal factories, in which coat are burn on a daily basis.
Some remedies could be implemented to tackle the surging level of resources consumption. A viable solution is that high-quality product from developed countries should be mass manufacture, then sell to undeveloped countries with a lower price. Such a measure would enable lower-income citizens to experience high living standard without having more resources consumed. In addition, governments could lower the consumption rate by taking advantages of substantial energy resources, such as wind, solar and tidal energy. For instance, in Japan wind turbines are installed in grass fields and on the ocean which generated about twenty percent of the annual need of electricity without harming the environment.
To sum up, the overexploitation of natural resources derives from the strong demand in developing countries and the over-reliance on these types of resources. Strong measures, such as reducing the aforementioned demand and using alternative energy sources, should be applied to address this situation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 225, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'addressed'?
Suggestion: addressed
...over-reliant of countries. It should be address by some definite solutions, such as man...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, then, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1692.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.67785234899 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19515956372 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563758389262 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 529.2 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.1943915847 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 105.75 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.625 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.625 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109444169015 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0415204481241 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0564382050228 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0774913598115 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0458704096854 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.66 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.