Irrefutably, in today's competitive world, some guardian have been arranged additional classes to their school-aged children except school, while other say that school education is sufficient for thier children. I firmly believe that studying in school are enough for their academic performance meanwhile they should focuse on additional curricular activities.
Some progenitor say that their youngsters need more tume and classes to enhance their learning skills and become professionalist and expert in upcoming field. They want to teach every aspect of study to become them efficient and effective. As life is uncertain or unpredictable and tough competition nowadays, they would like their children to participate in additional knowledge of learning so as beat the colleagues. Despite of studying hard in busy schedule, they don't have time to play and enjoy their leisure time. Sometimes they feel bore and stress which lead to depression because they don't have friends and peer group to enjoy with themselves. For example, according to WHO, last year 40% students committed a suicide due to depression and had not fulfilled their parents expectations.
Nevertheless, on the other side, I believe that children should attend proper classes along with participating in extracurricular activities. These activities actually teach them truly life's lesson and how to tackle difficult situation in a constructive manner. By performing new activities everyday, they can easily identify keen interest to become what and follow it heartly throughout life. Motor and fine skills are also developed by doing it.. We have many examples of great personalities in every field where they do amazing job. For exemplify, if Pablo Picasso, spinash painter would not show interest toward painting and studying continously unknowingly, than how he become the most famous painter in the world.
In the conclusion, although school studying should be done by children for appropriate decision-making but for career orientation, children must participate in other activities also.
- Some people think cars are a better way of transportation around the city while other prefer cycling Discuss both views and give your opinion 89
- Many parents today organise extra classes for their children after school and at the weekends Do you feel that this is a worthwhile thing to do or do you feel children have enough education at school Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant e 82
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, nevertheless, so, while, for example, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1752.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.61538461538 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01125846031 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637820512821 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 537.3 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.334645649 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.8 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.93333333333 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229780867106 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0706371904196 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0654990207184 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151928302749 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0639576634983 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.32 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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