Nowadays, more and more tasks at home and at work are being performed by robots. why do you think this is happening ? is it a positive or negative development?
Technology has revolutionized the lives of people in unprecedent manner as , in these days people are becoming dependent on electronic gizmos for household chores and office works as well. Undoubtedly, this dependency bring some advantages albeit, it can cause numerous side effects on health and lifestyle.
From the perspective of positive development , robots are making life more convinient as it helps to save time and efforts. Taking an example of computers which are used in every field, nowadays, they are capable of performing time consuming works within few seconds and ease the life of workers . Moreover , distinctive electronic gadgets are available for washing, cleaning , cooking and many other task to be performed at home. As a result, these robots are helpful for housewives , workers , old age people and even for them who are facing some kind of illness because it make work effortless.
Despite having benefits, these machines are effecting the lifestyle and may cause several health issues. At the working places, employees have to sit for long hours in front of computer which might weak their eyesight, cause obesity even though in some cases muscle and joint problems can occur due to wrong postures. Furthermore, people are hooked to electronic gadgets at home as well which results in sedentary lifestyle and several fatal diseases. Whereas, in this modern era, people choose to work through robots rather than manually in order to save their time . Thus , technology has adverse effects on the lives of people.
In conclusion, as far as , i am concerned electronic gizmos can make ones life easy and fast due to its advanced technology . but, its adverse effects can not be neglected . So, people should limit the use of these gadgets in order to live a healthy lifestyle and must perform some of the task manually.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, may, moreover, second, so, thus, well, whereas, in conclusion, kind of, as a result, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1546.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17056856187 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68794519453 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598662207358 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.067163968 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.428571429 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3571428571 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.57142857143 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 5.01903807615 458% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178399446697 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0587751197484 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0550766488105 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0989413945545 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0669668034397 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.