Nowadays more people are choosing to socialise online rather than face to face is this a positive or a negative development?
technological advancement played dynamic role in changing traditional trends in society for instance people feel more comfortable now to socialise online rather than meeting physically, I believe it is a positive development because it provides many opportunities to learn new thing when someone is using social networking platform while there are some drawbacks as well.
Moreover, the advent of social media such as Facebook enlightens the mind of many people through connecting them throughout the globe. People would actually get many benefits from it when one is connected with anyone anywhere in the world. Social networking apps are shipping traditional gathering into a new forms such as WhatsApp groups and connected everyone on single platform 4 any type of task.
Besides, if someone is connected with another person both will get benefit from it while communicating such as learning more about their native language and people can be better understand your culture and values which could either be understand while tourism are making a direct contact with locals.
Furthermore online socialisation also helps in understanding other persons view how he projects oneself better learn a new business ideas as well. Online socialisation better help someone to get more knowledge about machine learning, because they are connected through smart machine device.
In addition to that, in this pandemic times one has to follow the necessary social distancing precaution people eventually started the online socialisation an online learning and work from home trained loss increased in order to follow the sops.
In conclusion, the rise of electronic media complaint people to have more healthy knowledge about smart devices also it saves time so in 21st century one has to make one self aware of online socialisation because future belongs to machines.
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| 2021-05-30 | Faisal Gaffar | 67 | view |
| 2021-05-30 | Faisal Gaffar | 67 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, while, as to, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1577.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45674740484 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80744195724 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615916955017 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 84.2488963916 49.4020404114 171% => OK
Chars per sentence: 175.222222222 106.682146367 164% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.1111111111 20.7667163134 155% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.8888888889 7.06120827912 197% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188317528113 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0750408565413 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0547934065433 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0979097633321 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0531059656047 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.3 13.0946893788 155% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.54 50.2224549098 61% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.0 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.98 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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