Dear Mr. and Mrs. Jones,
I received your letter this morning about the inconvenience you faced due to the disturbance caused by me. I feel ashamed that how much you both suffered the last weekend. Actually, I and my roommate has joined musical classes, therefore, a tutor comes at home for teaching to us. As we are quite busy in the working days and we do not have enough time for attending the classes. So, we decided to do it on weekends.
Kindly accept our sincere apology for disturbing you. We were not aware that the music sound reached your apartment, even we closed all the windows and doors properly for soundproof. You are older neighbors and we do not want to lose our friendship because of this mistake. Please forgive us for this kind of action.
We promised you that you will not suffer again. We will attend the classes at the institutes rather than at your apartment, as we already informed our teacher. I hope you will understand the concern and forgive us.
I am looking forward to your prompt response.
Yours faithfully,
Shain
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, look, so, therefore, i feel, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 14.0 26.3917525773 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 880.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 186.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7311827957 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51888462287 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.661290322581 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 266.4 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.9949837675 44.8134815571 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 58.6666666667 76.5299724578 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.4 16.8248392259 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.06666666667 4.34317383033 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251799205652 0.216113520407 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0890662185323 0.0766984524023 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0615179969043 0.0603063233224 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123680363301 0.12726935374 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0691584442534 0.0580467560999 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 8.37731958763 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.27 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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