Indubitably, education is one of the most crucial things which helps everyone's to earn their bread and butter. It is often argued by certain individuals that juveniles should devote their time to participate in educational activities during their leisure time otherwise it is invaluable time. Certainly, I concur with this notion.
Apparently, studying educational activities in leisure time holds a wide range of constructive benefits. To commence with, educational activities inclines the analytical skills of a child. To illustrate, teenagers who are playing games like chess perform exceptionally in their academics and later become successful in their future. The credit goes to the parents who ensured that their child becomes an intelligent person and would gain productivity in his or her entire life. Moreover, juveniles will be focused on terms of building their career and future prospects. Plus, they will start realizing the responsibilities which they want to follow in their adulthood.
Further, juveniles could become great professors or mentors in their adult stage while studying from these activities because, in some countries, most of people know the value of education which can only help you to live with your necessities in your life. Finally, they could become great leaders and could be involved in participating in developing a good society as an educated person can only make a meaningful contribution in society.
In conclusion, educational activities uplift the standard of health and wealth. Thus, adolescents should consume free time in fruitful activities which can be later on become profitable for their future prospects.
- Some people think that lawbreakers should be sent to prison However others think that better talents among those should be made to work Discuss both views and give your own opinion 73
- You visited a town last month and told your friend that you would like to meet However you could not make it Write a letter to your friend In your letter you should express your apology why you could not meet making arrangements to meet him 78
- Some people believe that if a police officer carries guns it can encourage a higher level of violence To what extent do you agree or disagree 84
- You have a full time job and you are also doing a part time evening course You now find that you cannot continue the course Write a letter to your teachers In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action 73
- Your friend has just moved to a new house Write a letter to your friend and let him know about the gift that you have prepared for him her In your letter you should describe the gift how it will be delivered explain why you chose it 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 147, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
... activities because, in some countries, most of people know the value of education which can o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, but, finally, if, moreover, so, thus, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1412.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55905511811 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99044710462 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.614173228346 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.3848873892 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.615384615 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5384615385 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.38461538462 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183367696201 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0645970349033 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0542472073365 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117837950912 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0265002927994 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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