Recently you saw an article in a newspaper/journal about a city/town you know and some of the information in the article was incorrect. Write a letter to the editor regarding this.
In your letter, you should tell:
how you know about this city/town
what information was incorrect
what the editor should do about this.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to inform you about an article which I have just read in the latest edition of the "Times Now" magazine in which some information about one of the wonders of the world was incorrect.
As for how I am familiar with Agra, a city in northern India, I was born and brought up there. In fact, I witnessed the expansion and development of this city with my own eyes. Although a couple of decades ago it was merely a small village, it turned into a metropolitan city after the construction of an incredible artifact.
With regard to the misinformation, the Taj Mahal, which was originally built by the order of Shah Jahan, but the article published in the magazine indicated this as an order of Mahatma Gandhi, which is incorrect information.
Because this information could misguide the local readers, may I suggest you publish a retraction and undertake not to repeat such mistakes in the near future. Furthermore, I have attached a few references in my letter for you, about the facts of this beautiful city.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
James
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 226, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...Gandhi, which is incorrect information. Because this information could misguide ...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, look, may, so, as for, in fact, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 937.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 193.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85492227979 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87646443146 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.626943005181 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 297.0 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.3917133132 44.8134815571 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.111111111 76.5299724578 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4444444444 16.8248392259 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.55555555556 4.34317383033 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.361935274136 0.216113520407 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121738821678 0.0766984524023 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0648989962192 0.0603063233224 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17139658823 0.12726935374 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0661436358649 0.0580467560999 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 8.37731958763 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 8.71597938144 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 7.59969072165 119% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.