Young people should leave their homes from rural areas to work in cities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people think the young should leave their homes from countries to work in urban areas. I partly agree with this view.
On the one hand, compared with working in countries, the youth working in urban areas will be provided with higher salaries and a better welfare system by companies. Because the number of firms in cities is far more than that in countries, they compete with each other to attract brilliant employees by making use of improving salaries and offering some additional welfare. For instance, when working overtime in some giant companies, such as Ali and Tencent, you could eat a variety of free food and take free bus to your home, both of which are offered by the companies. Meanwhile, you are admitted to go to companies later than usual next day because of working overtime last night.
Also, working in cities enriches the mental life of the young. Working in urban areas means the young also live in them and their life will be more colorful. They can see some top stars concerts like the Linkin Park, the ColdPlay and Taylor Swift, who will never appear in rural areas. Furthermore, at weekends, the youth visit museums and art exhibitions with friends, which makes them know more knowledge beyond their work.
On the other hand, working in countries also offers a less stress and comfortable life style. The young do not need to worry about the rent, utility bills and living cost when living with their parents, the owners of the houses, who are willing to do all housework, provide free rooms for their children, and undertake their children’s all or parts of living cost. Therefore, the young can spend salaried earned monthly by themselves on what they like and want and their life will be more satisfying.
To conclude, I partly approve of the young working in cities, but it does not means working in countries is wrong, because they are just two kinds of life style. Therefore, working in urban or rural areas depends on what kind of life style the youth want.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'mean'? As 'do' is already inflected, the verb cannot also be inflected.
Suggestion: mean
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Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'mean'
Suggestion: mean
...oung working in cities, but it does not means working in countries is wrong, because ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, therefore, while, for instance, kind of, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1663.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79250720461 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29752591975 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544668587896 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.7020007109 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.866666667 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1333333333 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30122860355 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105474519394 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0836200178162 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184872167045 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0840590664075 0.056905535591 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 50.2224549098 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.