A pet belonging to a friend of yours recently passed away. Write a letter to console your friend. In your letter include :
• Your condolences.
• What kind of animal it was.
• Something you think will raise your friend’s spirits.
Dear Mike,
I am writing to express my sympathy for your loss. I am sorry that your dog Greg passed away. I was deeply saddened to hear about his passing. Yesterday, I reminisced about how you and I took your dog and went for a picnic. He was such a funny puppy then.
I also remember how he save our friends' daughter in a lake when she was drowning. He is a kind and brave dog. His life was not spent for nothing and he will always stay in our hearts. That’s why I suggest you invite our close friends to my house this weekend and spend quality time together in the name of Greg. My husband will cook grilled meat with veggies, meanwhile, I’ll bake cookies in form of bones for children and we all together will speak well of him.
Let me know what you decide.
Take care of yourself,
Maria
P.S. My love and thought are with you.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 95, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...m sorry that your dog Greg passed away. I was deeply saddened to hear about his p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, then, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 692.0 937.175257732 74% => OK
No of words: 161.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.29813664596 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.1085469994 2.54303337028 83% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.683229813665 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 201.6 290.88556701 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.4751769694 44.8134815571 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 57.6666666667 76.5299724578 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.4166666667 16.8248392259 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.58333333333 4.34317383033 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222255261843 0.216113520407 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0766251779678 0.0766984524023 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0623307658994 0.0603063233224 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0861525748141 0.12726935374 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0834283244783 0.0580467560999 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.5 8.37731958763 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.07 8.71597938144 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.34 7.59969072165 83% => OK
difficult_words: 21.0 41.2886597938 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 8.62886597938 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.