apartment buildings are the prefered living space for many people. But many individuals prefer living in a house. Which do you prefer?
Finding an ideal place to live is the desire of most people; thus, choosing to live in an apartment or traditional house is a popular topics. Many people believe that living in a house brings more benefits to them than residing in an apartment. However, I think living in an apartment has more outweigh advantages than living in a regular house because of the security and convenience of living in an apartment.
First and foremost, most apartments are safer than traditional houses. When living in a traditional house, people have to protect themselves. However, people who live in an apartment can be protected by the security system installed by the apartment management team. When buying or renting a flat, the building management team have to ensure the security of the people living in the building. Almost every apartment has guards who will do their best to make sure that it is impossible for thief or other threats happening around and in the building. Moreover, there are many equipment that are very helpful for managing the building. This includes access cards, finger prints scanners, cameras, alarms, and so forth. Therefore, security people can control the entrance of the apartments which will make the residents feel more secure. Indeed, because people will be more safe living in a flat, it is a more beneficial option compared to living in a traditional house.
Along with safety, convenience is also a factor which shows that apartments are better than houses. Since cities are often very crowded with many people while there is not enough land to build normal houses, living in an apartment is reasonable. This is because in cities, there are a lot of services, including: public transportation, schools, hospitals, offices,.... Therefore, living in an apartment within a city will be advantages because people can enjoy these services. Moreover, nowadays, even flats are attached with essential services built within the building in order to provide the residents with best services. This includes the gym, swimming pool, small park. In addition, rooms in apartments are usually designed on a flat surface, which is easier to clean up. People do not have to carry the cleaning equipment to other floors, which takes a lot of time and effort. Therefore, people can save their time and spend it on more important things. Furthermore, because the apartment often have one floor, the relationship between family members will be significantly improved. The family members may see each other more often since the indoor space is not too big. Specially, it is more convenient to take care and look after small children or old grandmother or grandfather. By and large, the convenience of the apartment attract people to reside here.
On the other hand, some people believe that there will be less social interact when living in apartment block. However, most apartments are built with community areas where people can do exercises, hang out, and communicate with each other. Since an apartment building has large number of people and there are only one or two social areas, these areas often crowded and bustling. Therefore, people living in a building will have more interaction than people living in private houses.
In conclusion, people should live in an apartment rather than in regular houses. Flat brings people safety and amenity, which is very important in our lives. Therefore, people should reside in an apartment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'topic'?
Suggestion: topic
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun equipment seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much equipment', 'a good deal of equipment'.
Suggestion: much equipment; a good deal of equipment
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...nsportation, schools, hospitals, offices,.... Therefore, living in an apartment wi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, while, i think, in addition, in conclusion, by and large, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 15.1003584229 179% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 43.0788530466 46% => OK
Preposition: 71.0 52.1666666667 136% => OK
Nominalization: 26.0 8.0752688172 322% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2892.0 1977.66487455 146% => OK
No of words: 563.0 407.700716846 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13676731794 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.87110059796 4.48103885553 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67107958812 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 245.0 212.727598566 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.435168738899 0.524837075471 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 914.4 618.680645161 148% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 32.0 20.6003584229 155% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.8002300484 48.9658058833 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.375 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.59375 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.875 5.45110844103 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 22.0 11.8709677419 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285192926289 0.236089414692 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0859830003424 0.076458572812 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0591820523978 0.0737576698707 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190147349143 0.150856017488 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.036754097994 0.0645574589148 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 86.8835125448 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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